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- Hello CaNJaK_TR!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Ill make this short and simple. Lets start off with your structure.
- Your structure is lacking depth and detail. Try to use stairs and slabs for detailing, and i would recommend getting rid of the side stairs. They dont look appealing. refer to ./warp depthtutorial for help.
- Your terrain doesnt look appealing. U need to smooth it a lot, and get rid of the stone/ores because that doesnt look like the right layer to be putting it. the stone/ore should be the bottommost layer since its closest to the ground. Your terrain is also flat and plain cuz it lacks color and variation. Try to add other blocks to it such as green clay, cobblestone, gravel, etc. U should also make it so your pond is actually in the ground instead of on top of it.
- You dont have any organics on your plot which is needed to rank. Organics are things such as trees, flowers, animals, etc.
- You have a long way to go if you wanna rank up. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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