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- Hey there! :3
- This is going to be a really picky review - You definitely deserve Aspirant, as that structure is beautiful!
- However, I'd just like to see some little corrections on the other aspects.
- Terrain; Having just one layer of grass on top of the cliffs looks a little odd.
- http://i.imgur.com/LugOHAu.jpg
- Look at this image, and notice how there's a slight overhang of dirt over the edge, and also a brought up area behind to balance out the difference in cliff/grass.
- Organics; I think the issue with your trees is the lack of roots. It all feels a little squashed at the bottom, pull out the roots a little more. Also, the shaping of the leaves is a bit too triangular. If you're going for a willow tree look, include some vines as leaves instead of all leaves. Also, check out Plutouthere for a willow tree tutorial on his YouTube channel (Pretty sure he has one)
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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