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- Novice Review:
- Hey again! Good plot and i like how you widened the tree in the middle of the plot, but its quite rough right now so try and smooth it out more so that it seems more uniform. The leaves on it are too small for the trunk of the tree, so maybe try and move your helicopter up a few more blocks and fluff the leaves out so they match the size of the trunk.
- The buildings havent changed much since i last saw them, so they still need more layers and detailing to make them more interesting! At this point, google can be an excellent resource :D Search up pictures of minecraft siege towers or bunkers or something and really pull some inspiration from there. *DO NOT COPY PEOPLES BUILDS!* Im only saying to look for inspiration, not to copy people, something that many players get mixed up on >.>
- Good luck with the rest of your plot and i really hope we can rank you soon!!
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