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- Novice Review:
- Cute plot so far, but theres some things i think you should work on before ranking up!
- Your terrain is good, but try to make it more smooth and less blocky. Also, having one block more prominent than the rest of them will make the terrain look less busy and give your eyes a break :)
- Your organics are interesting :p I like the shape of your trees, but the fences as the main block is indeed a little strange x3 Perhaps having wood or something more realistic would do the trees some justice!
- Your structures are okay, but theyre mainly one block, so try and give them some more variation and get them to match the theme a bit better. Also, with your detailing, be careful of just spamming slabs, as it looks a bit messy!
- Good plot overall but it just needs some work! Good luck!
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