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- Novice Review:
- Looking better but there still some stuff you need to work on before ranking up
- The trees are still the same, so try and make some of them bigger to give more variation and to make it seem less empty on the plot. The mushrooms are cute but again, some of them need to be bigger and maybe even different colors to bring more variation to the plot.
- The structure is okay, but try to add more layers to it to give it depth, and detail it appropriately with slabs, stairs, fences etc.. Also try to add more structures to the plot, weather they be houses, towers, a castle whatever
- The terrain is a bit random, so maybe try and have a more dominant color come through. Also try and have the levels of terrain more defined.
- Good luck
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