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- Novice Review:
- Decent plot so far, but it needs some work before ranking up!
- Your terrain is good, and has a decent palette.
- Your structure is okay, but it needs a little work x3 Theres not a a whole lot of depth in the build, so try to create some more. As for detailing, there should be for sure more. Detail your build appropriately with stairs, slabs, fences or whatever you want, as you have done in some places already.
- As for your trees, make them fluffier and more tree like....
- DW i kid xD But with piney trees like that, try to give them the cone shape that they have irl. Also, adding more to the bottom of the trunk to make the tree thicker and give it more stability. Adding more trees around the plot is a good idea for filling the empty space here and there.
- Hope this helps!
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