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  1. Length: Every entry was seven days in length, and filled all seven days. Since there are no points for this section, and every entry filled it adequately, there will be no further mention of this.
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  3. Caishun:
  4. Trips (15 points): Trips art varied in structure and take into account the rhythm of island life. Some of them have somewhat unrealistic time structures (visiting all of 15 towns in two days? I’ll get whiplash) and would perhaps be better off limiting it to a selection of events. 11/15
  5. Stay / Travel Options(10 points): I’m a fan of the numerous transportation options mentioned. Between the “Island hopper” boat rides, the jeep safari, and the “travel card” you give a number of options and how they can be applied. I find the “travel card” a little vague, as it only says that it works for “all types of transport.” Can I catch a ride on a passing camel with it? Or the flying house from Up? No? I want my money back >:( But despite me focusing on that so much this was very good. What was perhaps a little weaker was the stay options. There are references to five star hotels, and one hotel mentioned as famous and at the center of the island, but little detail otherwise. - 8/10
  6. Costs / Specific Rules / Packing (5 points): Costs are very well done and detailed, including the existence of an exchange rate. No specific ‘rules’ per say mentioned but there is an extra information section with good detail, and also mentions that asking locals questions works, so that works as the same thing. Not much mention of packing besides “bring swimwear”, but it’s there, and the rest of this section is good enough that I’ll give it the full score. - 5/5
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  8. Total: 24/30
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  10. New Wakanda:
  11. Side note- the second person was rather strange here. No points taken off, but the entire thing being addressed to “you” made it seem rather odd.
  12. Trips (15 points): I thought this section was rather mixed. Some parts of it were very good; I enjoyed day 4 particularly. However the part about your friend Snaquaza was sort of odd, and out of tone with the rest of it. However the descriptions of activities were very detailed, which ups your score. - 11/15
  13. Stay / Travel Options (10 points): I’m a little confused as to whether you’re staying in an uninhabited hut or a hotel. Mentions of transportation were there but fairly sparse. - 6/10
  14. Costs / Specific Rules / Packing (5 points): Packing is mentioned, and is actually rather strong. Costs are glossed over for the most part, but are also there. Specific rules aren’t really mentioned, but you give enough specificity of action that I feel comfortable giving you that action, as it is tough to mess up following that close of an itinerary. - 5/5
  15. Bonus: The incredible specificity in actions and details of the events you take place in inspire me to give a bonus point here. -1/0
  16. Total: 22/30
  17. ANOR Londo:
  18. Trips (15 points): Well-timed, well-described, detailed, varied, with alternate options given allowing people to make contingency plans; this section is excellent. I have no particular complaints or observations, well done ^_^ -15/15
  19. Stay / Travel Options (10 points): The stay options are amazing. You discuss the cost of different options in a space-effective way, provide a recommendation while mentioning other options, and briefly touch on some (rather strange but hey who am I to judge) amenities that are offered by / are convenient to the hotel. I would love to give 10/10 for this section but unfortunately travel options are rather glossed over. You mention arriving by plane and one drive, otherwise there’s nothing. -8/10
  20. Costs / Specific Rules / Packing (5 points): Costs are given frequently, if not for everything. The exchange rate is a nice touch. Packing is... not mentioned. :( Specific rules aren’t really mentioned, but I didn’t feel that this lack really hurt the piece as a whole. -3/5
  21. Bonus: This was the most detailed of the guides / travel plans, and most sold me on going to the place, and overall I felt had the most professional presentation, melding its sections well etc. I will give it one bonus point. -1/0
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  23. Total: 27/30
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  25. Overall: All three of these were solid this time. I think more than one options would have been good per day in all of them, but that’s a fairly minor gripe.You guys make it sound like your countries have everything, which is the job of a trip advertisement. I’d give you a thumbs up, but drampa’s don’t have thumbs :(
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