Last night as I was Watching _____ news, I learned that our city has received a grant to benefit the people of New York by (Proposals). Both of these proposals are exciting for the city of New York and would contribute a great deal to achieving the goal of ___. However, I believe that the greatest benefit from using the money would be to enhance (improve, augment, develop, increase) ____.
It can be argued that ___. However, my fear is that ___. While improving ___, I am Also concerned that ___. Add supporting details (examples, facts, statistics, descriptive images, definitions, cause and effect). It is true that ___, but at least there is ___.
Even though enhancing ___. Urban resident’s need ___. For example, many people ___. If the community does not have ___, the people may ___. Add supporting details (examples, facts, statistics, descriptive images, definitions, cause and effect). The city would therefore greatly benefit its resident by enhancing (improving, augmenting, developing, and increasing) ___.

The ___ in a large city like New York will provide relief from ___. Everyone needs. While many people ___, others ___. These ___ people would benefit (how?) Add supporting details (examples, facts, statistics, descriptive images, definitions, cause and effect). As a result of ___ the city, could (improve, augment, develop, increase) with adequate grant funding.
In conclusion, I believe that by investing in the city’s ___ is an investment in the well-being of our citizens and community. Whatever use the city may decide to make of the funds, either of these options would provide a enormous benefit to the people who live in New York. However, I do hope that the Board will decide that the greater good is to improve the ___. Thanks very much for your time and consideration of this most crucial issue facing our community.