Tejanth's Aspirant Review

Hey there!

You didn't listen to the advice I gave you; instead you just added more things, all of which are still totally random on the plot. You put hot air balloons under the ground, and I only just noticed you didn't //mask air with your tree leaves, so you replaced the logs as you made them.

I know it really sucks to restart a plot, but I honestly highly recommend it in your case, because at the moment you're adding good things, just not good for this plot in particular.

Good luck!
- Dutty :3