Ultimate Exploiter

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Rejected front cover proposal

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1: ...We should've realized this sooner. // He may have won the duel against the Barians, but he's incredibly worn out now. His Zexal form is in pretty bad shape...
2: Yuma! Astral! Please, wake up!
3: We can't bring him to the hospital like this, // let's take him back to his house for now.
4: I'll carry him, Kaito.
5: I have to do whatever it takes to make sure he'll be okay...!

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1: ...I see.
2: Let me know if you need me.
3: I'll send for the best emergency rescue team there is.
4: Got it, thanks...
5: Looks like he's still not waking up...

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1: Hey, Yuma.
2: Why do you go so far to put yourselves in harm's way for the sake of others?
3: As long as you keep looking out for every single person you see,
4: You're only going to continue to get beaten up like this.
5: And even then, // you're determined to take on everything on your own.
6: You don't ever bother // letting me take on any of the load...
7: You could at depend on me at least a little bit, you know.
8: There's no way I'll be able to
9: Just shut up and watch like this any longer...!

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1: Shark...?
2: Yuma!
3: Shark... I'm so hungry...
4: I don't have any energy left...
5: You're awake?!
6: If you're feeling hungry, then you're gonna be all right! // Once we get to your place, you can have as much food as you want!

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1: ...... // I need something to eat RIGHT NOW, though.
2: Huh? All right, fine.
3: I'll buy you some bread from a convenience store or something.
4: ...Hey, you shouldn't move yet, idiot!
5: Urgh...
6: Geez, look at you, you can't even stand up straight yet! // Just stay still, I'll go buy you something...?!
7: Didn't I tell you that I needed to eat something RIGHT NOW?

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1: I'm seriously way too hungry, I can't help it...
2: drool sfx
3: Hah...
4: Hah...
5: Shark... I need your...!
6: Whoa, what's going on wtih you... // What the hell are you saying?
7: All right, all right! I got it, Yuma! // If that's what you want, I guess I can help you out with it a little...

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1: Hey! // What the hell do you think you're touching!
2: What's wrong, Shark...?
3: You haven't gotten big down there yet...
4: You ARE Yuma, right...?

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1: Nope! // Right now I'm Overlaid with Astral.
2: I'm the ultimate lifeform Zexal!
3: Zexal...?
4: That's right.
5: Hey, stop that! // I'm not going to do this in a place like this!
6: Geez, just shut up already...
7: Like I've said, I'm hungry! // I don't care about you want.
8: You...!

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1: Where the hell did you learn how to suck like that! // Hurry up and undo your transformation so you can calm down already!
2: Hey, you listening to me, Yuma?!
3: Ah! Dammit...! // I'm... going to cum!

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1: (sfx) suck
2: (sfx) splursh
3: Mmm, I feel rejuvenated.
4: Thanks for the meal, Shark.
5: You were practically on the verge of collapsing just earlier, // and your wounds are all healing up too now!

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1: What's going on... // It feels like something's been leaving my body ever since he started touching me...
2: Mm, // what a waste...
3: Hey, Yuma.

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1: What did you do to my body?
2: It's got something to do with your own body recovering, right?
3: What did I do?
4: Obviously, I was trying to get you erect since you still look like you're full of energy.
5: That has nothing to do with it! // Don't touch me, I don't feel like doing this with you right now!
6: Oh? If you don't feel like doing it, that's fine. // I can just go find someone else to do it with.
7: Huhh? Don't tell me you're gonna go find some other guy to fuck around with.
8: When did you become such a damn slut...
9: If you don't want me to go, // then you know what to do... right?

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1: You've got a lot of nerve, threatening me like that...
2: ...Mm
3: ...Hey, // how long are you just going to keep fingering me like that.
4: Hurry up and mess me up with your dick already.
5: No one said anything about doing this at your damn pace.
6: (sfx) plunge
7: Ohh! <3 <3
8: Just shut up and deal with it.

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1: Don't try to act all tough.
2: Your guy down here is practically begging to be put inside me...
3: C'mon <3
4: No need to hold yourself back, you know?
5: You sure are cocky, huh...
6: I don't have to go that far for you. // If you want it so badly, put it in yourself.

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1: All right, then... // I'll go right ahead and take it in, Shark. <3
2: Mm... So hot...
3: Ah! I've... // I've been wanting this...!

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1: It's... all the way in...!
2: Amazing... <3
3: Mm!
4: I can feel my strength leaving my body again...!
5: There's no doubt about it!
6: He's taking something from my body by doing this!
7: Ah! <3 <3 // Shark's dick is inside me again!
8: It's getting so big <3 <3
9: I have no idea what exactly he's taking, but one thing's for sure. I won't be able to let this last for much longer!
10: Hey, Shark! I'm gonna move now! // I can do whatever I want with your dick, right?
11: W-Wait, that's...!
12: I'm not gonna wait, I can't hold myself back anymore!

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1: Uwah... <3
2: Amazing... What is this...?!
3: I'm going to go crazy...
4: Shark!
5: Shark!! <3

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1: I've had... // enough...
2: with you shaking your hips like that...!
3: Uwah...!
4: Hah... // Hahh <3
5: My body... // can't take it anymore...!
6: If this keeps going on any longer...
7: I'm gonna be eaten up! Like hell I'd let that happen!
8: Shark, what are you...
9: I didn't want to do this, but I guess I can play along with you for now!

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1: Just hurry up and cum already, dammit!
2: Agi...! // Noo! Your cock is way too deep <3 <3
3: It's banging all the way inside me...! <3
4: Look at you. You were acting all big earlier, but as soon as I started going all out, you run into trouble keeping up.
5: Ah! Idiot! Stop it! // Stop hitting the same spot over and over again!
6: Watch as I make you my bitch in no time.

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1: How's this, Yuma! You at your limit yet? // C'mon, cum!
2: Ah! <3 // Ahh! <3
3: Uuu <3
4: Let it fly out!
5: Mm <3
6: Shark! Shar... // Shark...
7: C'mon, Yuma... // I'm about to cum inside you...!
8: Go ahead, Shark! // Cum! Fill me up!

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1: Kh...!
2: Cum inside me!
3: Ahhhh....! <3 <3

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1: Hah... // Hah... <3
2: Hah... How's that, Yuma.
3: I'm guessing you learned your lesson now...
4: Shark...
5: Let's do it again... <3
6: The ultimate lifeform Zexal II continued his relentless attack.

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1: [Bonus Manga] The greatest duelists can even create...
2: Considering how many times I've cummed in you, you'd definitely be pregnant if you were a girl.
3: (note the ordering of the panels) I could do it if you really wanted me to. (smaller txt) getting pregnant, that is.
4: ...Huh? (smaller txt) Astral...?
5: I'm pretty familiar with the making of female reproductive organs. // And while in this ultimate form, I can pass on our genetic information as well.
6: And then we could have a proper-
7: I feel like you actually might end up doing that, so I'm just going to tell you right now to stop!
8: Essentially, Zexal II can become a futanari too! He really can!
9: Taken aback
10: ...A kid with Yuma, huh...
11: Has no memory during his time as Zexal II.
12: Morning, Shark...
13: Has memory
14: Looks like he's not completely against the idea.

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Afterword
There's spoilers for the next manga page here, so you should probably read that first!

Ever since I saw II-sama's design, I knew I was in love. A few months later, I finally got
my II doujin published! II doing the riding is the best.
This time (well, probably most of the time to be honest), I just simply wrote exactly what I wanted to write.
II is the ultimate lifeform that can overwrite practically anything, so I thought that he should be the
type of person to be really aggressive. Essentially, II has the ability to do whatever he wants, and does
exactly that, and I thought Shark would be the perfect target for that aggressiveness.

I didn't have enough pages to explain it properly, but basically II was absorbing Shark's hidden Barian Chaos aura.
In the anime, denizens of Astral's world fall to the brink of death when they get Chaos removed from them.
We can consider Zexal to be Yuma Overlaying with Astral in Astral's pure state, II is when Astral overcame his
rising doubts, and III (final form) is when Astral is full of Chaos when he overlays with Yuma.
I assumed that in his II form, he ends up using a lot of his Chaos, and so he gets really hungry for more
whenever he finishes dueling, and unconsciously goes for more Chaos.

If he's going to exploit Shark for energy, might as well do it in a ero doujin fashion!
The sight of II-sama draining his loved one's energy is so beautiful
It was so fun drawing II-sama simply following his own desires.

If I ever do a sequel, I'd like to do Nash in his Barian form doing something with II-sama!
I'm sure II would love to chow down on Nash while he's practically overflowing with Chaos!
When II-sama gets serious, he can really hold the initiative, which would probably hurt Nash's pride as a man.

Technically speaking, they've already reached their form as III at this point in the anime, but I really liked II's design
so I kept it that way. Hopefully II will pop up in the anime again some day.
To be honest, III's design is way too god-like for me to think of it in an erotic way. I might build a shrine for it, though.

This ended up being pretty long, but thanks for reading it to the end!

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1: Ever since then, II began using Shark to replenish his energy.
2: Just do whatever you want...
3: Hyaafu, raitry ahv ohdist humhing (Shark, lately I've noticed something)
4: Don't talk with your mouth full! // ...Kh.
5: Oh, hyuu han shum in my mouf (Oh, you can cum in my mouth)
6: Guh...!!
7: Kh...
8: I'm gonna...!
9: squirt sfx

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1: Kh...
2: Strength is leaving my body again..
3: It seems that
4: You're the only person I can do this with.
5: I wonder why?
6: ...Huh?
7: It's like... I get the feeling that it'd only taste good if it comes from you.
8: It's likely that the energy that's he after...
9: ...is only inside me...?
10: Then just what kind of energy // do I have inside of me...