Tayter_Kat

BasicallyBatman

Jun 28th, 2015
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  1. Hello BasicallyBatman, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
  2. Structure:
  3. This is anything from houses to castles to market stalls. Your castle is good, but it is lacking depth on the walls surrounding the plot. Depth it the layers within a building/wall. You can achieve depth by adding trap doors, buttons, slabs, stairs, and fences onto or into a building wall.
  4. Organics:
  5. This is anything living, like trees and flowers. Your tree looks alright, the trunk looks a but big for the tree itself. Maybe narrowing it down a bit, that might look a bit better. Also, the glass levees don't really match the pallet of your plot. Pallet is the blocks chosen for your plot that sick to a certain theme. You can keep some of the glass, but try incorporating more blocks that fit your chosen pallet, like actual leaves and a tiny bit of clay.
  6. Terrain:
  7. This is the ground you walk on, including cliffs and ravines. IN some parts of your plot, it is fine, but there are some parts that are flat, like inside the castle walls. If you add small hills or craters, it might add to the castle, since it is supposed to be a bit dun down.
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  9. Good Luck<3
  10. -Tayter_Kat
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  12. P.S. I love your nameXD
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