Hi - I'm from the Widower Discord group. I really enjoyed reading this passage. Your descriptions are done so well I could see the game unfolding in my head. I only have one suggestion - Use something other than "Grief Monster" to describe the entity plaguing the main character. The overall tone of the written passage is so serious that I was sort of thrown out of the mood when I read that term. I'm not sure if you are making it obvious during gameplay that the entity represents Denial, or making it a bit more ambiguous so that the player is left wondering what it is until later, but, either way, "Grief Monster" reads more like a children's game creature rather than as something that fits the tone of this game. Something more like simply "Entity" or "Creature" would probably work better (I'd almost use "Demon" as in someone must battle their own "demons", but I know that word can be more triggering for some people.)