Best Indie VN 2016

me and a friend write a visual novel while i'm texting him in the car.

Fetty Krill: actually i just remembered something from 5th grade i can use
Fetty Krill: its my ultimate dad story
Offline: let a nigga know
Fetty Krill: does that mean u want to hear it?
Offline: yes I am the nigga in question
Fetty Krill: ok so do you remember those bikes they where giving away in 5th grade?
Offline: the school? like for the dare program or something else?
Fetty Krill: the school it was for like walking around the baseball field during lunch
Offline: I believe I remember it
Fetty Krill: i won one of those bikes
Fetty Krill: but i won the smallest of the bikes the other two where these huge ass mountain bikes that you had to be like 5 feet to ride
Fetty Krill: well the other kids that won was a 4th grader and a 1st grader
Fetty Krill: the first grader was way too small to use the bike and the bike that he won would be his first bike but he wouldnt be able to ride it until he was in like in 5th grade so i decided to trade bike with him and give him the helmet i also won
Fetty Krill: u shoulda seen this kids face when i proposed the trade
Offline: sounds good to me but I think you should find a way to spice it up a little
Offline: because you'll know what I mean when I say this, but you can pretty much guess what's gonna happen early in the story if you reread it
Fetty Krill: im saying that i just gave him the bike and it was a BMX
Offline: you should say that the kid wanted to be friends, you went to his house, met his beautiful sister who was in the same grade as you that you saved from depression because you gave her your bike (so they now have two bikes) and the two of them could now bike around together, something they haven't done in years cause of the sisters lack of motivation
Offline: a couple years into the future you and the sister become gradual friends and now she's your beloved fiancé
Fetty Krill: thats the most VN plot ive ever heard
Fetty Krill: and dating a blacky is against the rules desu
Offline: she's not black she's half spanish
Offline: you see
Offline: she was born to her white dad and beautiful Spanish mom
Offline: but Spanish mom died when she was young
Offline: that also being the cause of her depression
Offline: her white dad married a super nigger
Offline: and had the first grader nigger
Fetty Krill: and the brother was too young to remeber the mom
Fetty Krill: ive read vns too  https://steamcommunity-a.akamaihd.net/economy/emoticon/BlackSisterHDD
Offline: despite them not being blood related, she knew the story and he didn't, and she always wanted to be the good sibling
Offline: so by not telling him the story, she takes all the pain and is depressed normally
Fetty Krill: u should make the story into a VN
Fetty Krill: i dare u
Fetty Krill: no balls u wont
Offline: you giving them the bikes was able to get them close to each other, and the brother said he was happy to see her smiling again, and that's when she tells him every thing
Offline: then  they thank you for your small gesture that brought them together
Fetty Krill: is this another story for the pastebin?
Offline: it's gonna be
Offline: I don't think I'll turn it into a hentai but I think ill keep it around
Offline: does that mean you read my new profile?
Fetty Krill: is this gonna be a normal VN story or a katawa shoujo story where im pouring a gallon of lemon flavored lubed into a girls butthole?
Fetty Krill: and yes i did reed it
Offline: it's gonna be the story about how Kevin met his crippled fiancé (she got in a bike accident)
Fetty Krill: she has no legs like emi because she got hit by a car and they had to amputate them
Fetty Krill: her brother was enjoying the bike too much and didnt see the car coming she managed to move him but at the cost of her legs
Fetty Krill: the brother cant ever repay his sister and is always in his debt
Offline: chill son she's only paralyzed waist down because Kevin would be too depressed to ever step up and share her pains
Fetty Krill: thats why i said like EMI u baka
Offline: i never played it
Fetty Krill: the disabled girls game baka
Offline: yeah i never played it
Offline: she has legs but she just cant use them
Fetty Krill: https://www.google.com/search?q=emi+katawa+shoujo&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwj-8O_MscPMAhVLaD4KHf-_DG4Q_AUIBygB&biw=1526&bih=726#imgrc=aAiBlGb7OUS3IM%3A
Offline: yeah your tanned beauty fiance is just going to be in a wheelchair
Fetty Krill: -_- why does she have a wheelchair
Offline: iunno friend how do you like your crippled girls?
Fetty Krill: it depends
Offline: he likes em special ed  https://steamcommunity-a.akamaihd.net/economy/emoticon/glaring
Fetty Krill: kys
Offline: if she has legs or she doesnt ill write it in
Fetty Krill: well if shes like the picture i attached she cant ride a bike
Offline: she got in a accident because of the bike which is why shes crippled
Offline: she was gonna go back to depression but her brother called out to you to comfort her and you did after hearing the news
Offline: it happened to her in summer of 8th to 9th grade so she was kinda looked at weirdly during the beginning of high school since she went to a different high school than most of her friends
Fetty Krill: so i gotta go shower n get ready for class
Offline: alright ill take all of this put it into the pastebin and one day i'll expand on it
Fetty Krill: we can plan out the details of our VN when i get back
Fetty Krill: we'll green light it and make gorillians of dollars
Offline: itll be the indie vn of the decade
Fetty Krill: like disabled girls was
Fetty Krill: inb4 ive never played it
Offline: im downloading it to have it at the ready one day
Fetty Krill: its bretty good
Fetty Krill: especially since it was made by guys on 4chan as a joke
Fetty Krill: /a/ memes get taken way too far