JelloMan21 Plot Review

Hello JelloMan21!

My name is xDraghun and today i'll be reviewing your plot. A few things I immediately noticed that were missing from your plot was your organics and your terrain. Let me remind you that you need an organic, structure, and decent terrain to be ranked up. So first lets talk about your structure. As of now, your structure is lacking detail, and your wall designs are pretty repetitive. Try to use a variation of different blocks such as stairs and slab that match your palette to add detail to your walls. your depth is pretty decent, but I would like to see more. If u are having trouble with depth, refer to ./warp depthtutorial.

For your organics, I suggest starting off easy with a few trees. They dont have to be super awesome, but they do have to look custom and shown that effort was put into it.

Now lets talk about your terrain. Terrain is a major part of your plot to be ranked up. As of now, its hard to implement terrain to your plot since your structure takes up almost the whole thing. Maybe you could resize your structure and add some small mountains/hills to liven up your terrain. Try not to just use grass blocks, which make your terrain look plain. Add a variety of different blocks such as gravel, dirt, cobblestone, clay, etc that would match your palette so your terrain doesn't look flat.

For these reason, I would have to deny your plot. Please take my advice into consideration. Have a nice day, I hope u have better luck with your next submission. ^-^