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- Novice Review:
- Interesting plot so far, but theres some things i want you to work on before ranking up!
- Your terrain is decent, but try adding more levels to it to make is more dynamic and interesting :)
- The smaller mushrooms are cute, but try to make the tops of them a bit less vanilla and more custom! Other than that theyre nice. The big mushroom however, needs quite a bit of work. I can see the world edit spheres in the stalk so try and smooth it out to make it seem more realistic. Also, try to maybe straighten it out some to make it seem less weak and flimsy! Additionally, The head of the big mushroom is too flat at the moment, so try and puff it up some and make it more natural! (Perhaps looking up pictures of irl mushroom could help! Reference pictures are always a great tool)
- Lastly, theres no structure on the plot at all :p In order for us to see that youre a well rounded builder, there has to be some form of structure integrated in to your plot. Weather it be houses, big boats, castles, towers or whatever you want!
- Good luck and i hope this helps!
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