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zombiekilla95's Novice Review

Jun 24th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain. You've got that down. It's a little rough in some areas, but I feel like that was the general style you were going for. I like the palette - it's very original, but it makes a statement. I feel like you need some more dynamic structures and organics to reflect on this palette, just because it's so bold and 'out there'.
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  5. Secondly, organics. Your trees are looking nice. However, bear in mind you have world edit now - so you don't need to hand place leaves, you can make a brush. Just remember to have a high percentage of air in it!
  6. Eg.
  7. //br sphere 90%air,10%leaves
  8. //mask air
  9. It may also look nicer if you make the logs 6 sided!
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  11. Lastly, structures. Like I said, the structure may need to be a little more dynamic than just a couple houses on the plot. I would make a large structure, made from stone based blocks (stonebrick, cobblestone, andesite etc)
  12. Make sure it has a large amount of detail in it.
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  14. You have some empty areas of the plot still that should be filled. You can fill them with some more organics; maybe something other than a tree. Or you could make some small structures in these areas, if you choose to make the larger structure (which I would recommend) - just, like i say, make sure you use multiple layers of depth in the walls or whatever you choose to do, and have some good looking detail!
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  16. Good luck!
  17. - Dutty :3
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