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- Hey again! And congrats!
- Your structures have decent appropriate detail, the terrain have different levels, and even though theres empty space, the trees over top make up for it giving the plot decent atmosphere. The only thing i would have you work on is theme. If the theme is apocalyptic, then there should be broken branches of the trees, maybe holes in the ground to show the earth is cracking or whatever.
- Also in your next plot try and make full structures, not just pieces and walls x3
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