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- Novice Review:
- Good plot so far, but theres some things i think you should work on!
- Your structure is good, and i like the gears and waterwheel. Theres not much detail on the structure (stairs/slabs/fences etc) and theres not much depth (layers) to the build, so try and work on that for a sec and you should be fine! Your boat is v cute btw :p
- Your terrain is a little too boxy at the moment, so try and smooth it out as best you can. Perhaps introducing a new block to go with the grass and stone could be useful as well! Make the terrain more interesting!
- Your trees could use a bit more variation to them (i.e: size, height, leafage etc) to give your plot a more full feeling.
- Lastly i wanna talk about the empty space around the plot. Theres a lot of space in and around the plot that could be used for other things. You could add more terrain, organics, more structures, really anything you want (that goes with your theme), just to break the emptiness of the plot!
- Hope this helps, and good luck!
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