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Izabear7u7's Initiate Review

Jun 19th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain. Your terrain is okay. I like the two dimensions thing you were going for, looks really cool. You have a couple hills in some places, but I think you need a few more, as your terrain as a whole is a little flat.
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  5. Secondly, organics. I like the idea behind this plot, but if you want to make an organic, we usually prefer it isn't something from inside the game. If you want to make a dragon, please give it some more curves - the dragon you've made is far too 'blocky'. I know you ca argue it's a blocky game, but you understand what I'm going for. As well, don't use too many armour stands! They don't show any creativity when using them.
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  7. Lastly, structure. Your structure too closely replicates a vanilla nether fortress, same as the End towers. Please try and be original with the things you're building!
  8. As well, they lack all sorts of detailing and depth. You can add that with the use of patterned stairs/slabs etc, just don't use them in excess.
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  10. I highly suggest restarting your plot, as it needs to be a lot more original than the one you have!
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  12. Good luck!
  13. - Dutty :3
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