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- Hey there! :3
- Firstly, terrain. Your terrain is okay. I like the two dimensions thing you were going for, looks really cool. You have a couple hills in some places, but I think you need a few more, as your terrain as a whole is a little flat.
- Secondly, organics. I like the idea behind this plot, but if you want to make an organic, we usually prefer it isn't something from inside the game. If you want to make a dragon, please give it some more curves - the dragon you've made is far too 'blocky'. I know you ca argue it's a blocky game, but you understand what I'm going for. As well, don't use too many armour stands! They don't show any creativity when using them.
- Lastly, structure. Your structure too closely replicates a vanilla nether fortress, same as the End towers. Please try and be original with the things you're building!
- As well, they lack all sorts of detailing and depth. You can add that with the use of patterned stairs/slabs etc, just don't use them in excess.
- I highly suggest restarting your plot, as it needs to be a lot more original than the one you have!
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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