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- Kanagi
- If you have any problems, leave them to your maid Nagitan!
- My masters!
- ???
- Kyaaaaa!! Nagitaaan!
- Karin
- She's so cool!
- Manager
- Huhu, she's sure the popular one, isn't she?
- Maid
- I had my doubts at first... But she's become a proper maid.
- Kanagi
- ...Mark...Onee-sama, I'm finished here.
- Manager
- Oh, it's that time already... Great work today as always.
- Maid
- Good work. Take care on your way home, okay?
- Kanagi
- Indeed, good work. I leave the rest to you.
- Karin
- Ah! I'm heading out too.
- There's something I wanna show Nagitan!
- Maid
- Then allow me to show you out this way.
- ---
- Kanagi
- ...This is?
- Karin
- It's a manga I drew!
- I used Nagitan as a model in it, so I really hope you give it a read!
- Kanagi
- Ho... Let's take a look.
- -Manga-
- Nagitan the Maid
- I am Nagitan the Maid.
- A maid who works at a maid cafe.
- However, being a maid is a guise to remain hidden from society.
- For Nagitan the Maid's true mission is to fight the evils that thrive in this world!
- [*BANG!!*]
- -End Manga-
- Kanagi
- What is this "bang!!" here?
- Karin
- It's a sound effect that's used a lot in manga.
- It expresses how A-MAZING Nagitan is!
- Kanagi
- I see...how profound.
- -Manga-
- Nagitan the Maid
- Today, to carry out my true mission, together with my kouhai, I have come to the ruins of a mansion where evil runs rampant...
- -End Manga-
- Kanagi
- Artist, is this mansion modeled after where the mirror witch resides?
- Kanagi
- You got it!
- It's in total ruin so I went and sketched it.
- Kanagi
- ...But the background appears to be missing from the next page...
- Karin
- T-that's because...well... I couldn't draw it from another angle...
- J-just... Compensate for it using your mind's eye!
- Kanagi
- Hm, I understand.
- -Manga-
- Icchan the Kouhai
- Hamyamya~! Please wait for meee~!
- Nagitan the Maid
- Keep up, Kouhai Maid Icchan.
- If you tire out here you'll never become a worthy maid.
- Icchan the Kouhai
- Hamyaa~n.
- If I'm to become anything like the admirable Nagitan, I'll give it my all~!
- -End Manga-
- Kanagi
- ...This kouhai is rather peculiar...
- Karin
- It's called characterizing!
- To make the character stand out you gotta add distinctive inflections or whatnot to how they speak.
- Also, giving them a catchphrase or cutesy way of speaking gives them extra appeal!
- Kanagi
- I see... You've given this quite some thought, haven't you?
- What gave you the idea?
- Karin
- [I've got great role models all around me!]
- Kanagi
- Is that so.
- [*Fwip...*]
- -Manga-
- Rampant Evils of the World
- ["GUAAAAAAAAH!!"]
- Nagitan the Maid
- There it is! The evils running rampant throughout the world!
- Icchan the Kouhai
- Hamyan...hamyan!
- [*Fwip...*]
- Rampant Evils of the World
- ["GAHAHAHA! WEAKLINGS! WEAKLINGS!"]
- Icchan the Kouhai
- Hamya...mya...n... I'm at my limit~...
- Nagitan the Maid
- Ku...is this how it ends...
- -End Manga-
- Kanagi
- This enemy...can speak then.
- Karin
- Tough opponents are made to be able to talk!
- Kanagi
- Ho...
- Karin
- Beyond this point's the climax!
- -Manga-
- Icchan the Kouhai
- I'm taking...a dirt nap...
- Nagitan the Maid
- I-in a moment like this... Onee-sama would...
- Onee-sama
- ONE-SHOT☆MAID BEAM!
- And your enemy's toast. (Heart♥)
- Nagitan the Maid
- Guess there's no choice...!
- Icchan the Kouhai
- Y-you're not thinking...senpai~!? T-that...!
- Nagitan the Maid
- Indeed!
- ONE-SHOT☆FROM NAGITAN... LEAVE IT TO ME BEEEEAAAAAM!!
- Rampant Evils of the World
- ["GU-GUWAAAAH, I'M DONE FOOOOR!"]
- Icchan the Kouhai
- You did iiit!
- Nagitan the Maid
- That settles that.
- [BAAAAAANG!!]
- [THE END!]
- -End Manga-
- Kanagi
- …………
- Karin
- W-what'd you think!?
- Kanagi
- ...Hm.
- I don't understand the difficulties this entails...
- But I feel there is something here that you've shown.
- Karin
- Something I've shown... A-and...that is!?
- Kanagi
- It's love.
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