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Izumi Kanagi (Maid Outfit)

Feb 28th, 2022 (edited)
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  1. thanks bst for reviewing
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  3.  
  4. Kanagi
  5. If you have any problems, leave them to your maid Nagitan!
  6. My masters!
  7.  
  8. ???
  9. Kyaaaaa!! Nagitaaan!
  10.  
  11. Karin
  12. She's so cool!
  13.  
  14. Manager
  15. Huhu, she's sure the popular one, isn't she?
  16.  
  17. Maid
  18. I had my doubts at first... But she's become a proper maid.
  19.  
  20. Kanagi
  21. ...Mark...Onee-sama, I'm finished here.
  22.  
  23. Manager
  24. Oh, it's that time already... Great work today as always.
  25.  
  26. Maid
  27. Good work. Take care on your way home, okay?
  28.  
  29. Kanagi
  30. Indeed, good work. I leave the rest to you.
  31.  
  32. Karin
  33. Ah! I'm heading out too.
  34. There's something I wanna show Nagitan!
  35.  
  36. Maid
  37. Then allow me to show you out this way.
  38.  
  39. ---
  40.  
  41. Kanagi
  42. ...This is?
  43.  
  44. Karin
  45. It's a manga I drew!
  46. I used Nagitan as a model in it, so I really hope you give it a read!
  47.  
  48. Kanagi
  49. Ho... Let's take a look.
  50.  
  51. -Manga-
  52.  
  53. Nagitan the Maid
  54. I am Nagitan the Maid.
  55. A maid who works at a maid cafe.
  56. However, being a maid is a guise to remain hidden from society.
  57. For Nagitan the Maid's true mission is to fight the evils that thrive in this world!
  58.  
  59. [*BANG!!*]
  60.  
  61. -End Manga-
  62.  
  63. Kanagi
  64. What is this "bang!!" here?
  65.  
  66. Karin
  67. It's a sound effect that's used a lot in manga.
  68. It expresses how A-MAZING Nagitan is!
  69.  
  70. Kanagi
  71. I see...how profound.
  72.  
  73. -Manga-
  74.  
  75. Nagitan the Maid
  76. Today, to carry out my true mission, together with my kouhai, I have come to the ruins of a mansion where evil runs rampant...
  77.  
  78. -End Manga-
  79.  
  80. Kanagi
  81. Artist, is this mansion modeled after where the mirror witch resides?
  82.  
  83. Kanagi
  84. You got it!
  85. It's in total ruin so I went and sketched it.
  86.  
  87. Kanagi
  88. ...But the background appears to be missing from the next page...
  89.  
  90. Karin
  91. T-that's because...well... I couldn't draw it from another angle...
  92. J-just... Compensate for it using your mind's eye!
  93.  
  94. Kanagi
  95. Hm, I understand.
  96.  
  97. -Manga-
  98.  
  99. Icchan the Kouhai
  100. Hamyamya~! Please wait for meee~!
  101.  
  102. Nagitan the Maid
  103. Keep up, Kouhai Maid Icchan.
  104. If you tire out here you'll never become a worthy maid.
  105.  
  106. Icchan the Kouhai
  107. Hamyaa~n.
  108. If I'm to become anything like the admirable Nagitan, I'll give it my all~!
  109.  
  110. -End Manga-
  111.  
  112. Kanagi
  113. ...This kouhai is rather peculiar...
  114.  
  115. Karin
  116. It's called characterizing!
  117. To make the character stand out you gotta add distinctive inflections or whatnot to how they speak.
  118. Also, giving them a catchphrase or cutesy way of speaking gives them extra appeal!
  119.  
  120. Kanagi
  121. I see... You've given this quite some thought, haven't you?
  122. What gave you the idea?
  123.  
  124. Karin
  125. [I've got great role models all around me!]
  126.  
  127. Kanagi
  128. Is that so.
  129.  
  130. [*Fwip...*]
  131.  
  132. -Manga-
  133.  
  134. Rampant Evils of the World
  135. ["GUAAAAAAAAH!!"]
  136.  
  137. Nagitan the Maid
  138. There it is! The evils running rampant throughout the world!
  139.  
  140. Icchan the Kouhai
  141. Hamyan...hamyan!
  142.  
  143. [*Fwip...*]
  144.  
  145. Rampant Evils of the World
  146. ["GAHAHAHA! WEAKLINGS! WEAKLINGS!"]
  147.  
  148. Icchan the Kouhai
  149. Hamya...mya...n... I'm at my limit~...
  150.  
  151. Nagitan the Maid
  152. Ku...is this how it ends...
  153.  
  154. -End Manga-
  155.  
  156. Kanagi
  157. This enemy...can speak then.
  158.  
  159. Karin
  160. Tough opponents are made to be able to talk!
  161.  
  162. Kanagi
  163. Ho...
  164.  
  165. Karin
  166. Beyond this point's the climax!
  167.  
  168. -Manga-
  169.  
  170. Icchan the Kouhai
  171. I'm taking...a dirt nap...
  172.  
  173. Nagitan the Maid
  174. I-in a moment like this... Onee-sama would...
  175.  
  176. Onee-sama
  177. ONE-SHOT☆MAID BEAM!
  178. And your enemy's toast. (Heart♥)
  179.  
  180. Nagitan the Maid
  181. Guess there's no choice...!
  182.  
  183. Icchan the Kouhai
  184. Y-you're not thinking...senpai~!? T-that...!
  185.  
  186. Nagitan the Maid
  187. Indeed!
  188. ONE-SHOT☆FROM NAGITAN... LEAVE IT TO ME BEEEEAAAAAM!!
  189.  
  190. Rampant Evils of the World
  191. ["GU-GUWAAAAH, I'M DONE FOOOOR!"]
  192.  
  193. Icchan the Kouhai
  194. You did iiit!
  195.  
  196. Nagitan the Maid
  197. That settles that.
  198.  
  199. [BAAAAAANG!!]
  200. [THE END!]
  201.  
  202. -End Manga-
  203.  
  204. Kanagi
  205. …………
  206.  
  207. Karin
  208. W-what'd you think!?
  209.  
  210. Kanagi
  211. ...Hm.
  212. I don't understand the difficulties this entails...
  213. But I feel there is something here that you've shown.
  214.  
  215. Karin
  216. Something I've shown... A-and...that is!?
  217.  
  218. Kanagi
  219. It's love.
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