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A Fallen Comet (Complete)

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  1. > You sit across the table from the night princess.
  2. > She is shaking her head in disbelief.
  3. > "I cannot believe you could go to such lengths to avenge yourself."
  4. > You've come to enjoy your talks with her, leaders comparing their successes and failures.
  5. > This time, though, you had been telling her of your year-long quest for revenge against the ones who had killed your family.
  6. "It was necessary, Princess. If I had not, they would have never let go of their power. They would have taken my father's teachings and twisted them to the insane extreme."
  7. > "But your subjects-"
  8. "-were angry, dispossessed, and blind to what had happened."
  9. > She stares at you mournfully.
  10. "By the time they woke up, it would have become even worse. Someone had to stand up for what was right."
  11. > "What a painful world you must live in to find such extremes to be justified..."
  12. > You raise one eyebrow.
  13. "If I may be so frank, Princess, you have gone to extremes yourself in the past - to right a wrong as well."
  14. > She pierces you with an angry look. "And I was wrong. So very, very wrong."
  15. "But you do not disagree that something had to be done, to make right the neglect you faced?"
  16. > Luna frowns; you lift your cup of tea to your lips and take a sip.
  17. "My people - subjects, you would call them - also faced neglect. True, malicious neglect and oppression."
  18. > "What I did was still wrong. To bring eternal night would have killed all my little ponies in time, when the endless winter came."
  19. > Endless winter...
  20. > It brings back memories for a moment.
  21. > Of your last moment truly alive, before you came here.
  22. "I, too, tried to bring an endless winter to my home planet."
  23. > You pause, before murmuring a painful admission.
  24. "And I was wrong as well."
  25. > Luna's stare takes on newfound confusion, then awe. "You could do that?"
  26. > Something begins to tickle on the edge of your consciousness, a familiar presence from that memory she had awoken.
  27. "After all I have told you from what I came from, you are surprised? A story for another time, though."
  28. > You give her a wry grin.
  29. "It is the story of how I died."
  30. > Luna nods in understanding; when you had first been introduced to the two ruling sisters, you had explained how you had been about to die in the instant before you had crash-landed on their doorstep.
  31. > You... and your rival.
  32. > She knew it was not something you cared to discuss.
  33. "I am afraid I must go for now, Princess - if I am excused?"
  34. > She rises as you do.
  35. > "Of course, my friend."
  36. > Striding through Canterlot's streets, you ignore the stares ponies still unused to your presence throw your way.
  37. > Your entire focus is on the increasingly obtrusive familiar presence pressing against your mind.
  38. > Running a hand through your straw-blond hair, you begin to face the unavoidable fact that -he- is somewhere in the city.
  39. > He is, after all, the only other human here on this planet.
  40. > The only other human you could always sense like this.
  41. > The only other human with you when you died.
  42. > After all, he had killed you.
  43.  
  44. > Your home is in sight now, a nondescript house on the mountainside outskirts of this fantastic city.
  45. > The only hint it belong to one of two humans on the planet is the slightly taller doors and windows.
  46. > You reach for the keys in your pocket, moving to unlock the front do-
  47. > A shadow moves beside the door.
  48. > He steps out in front, meeting your eyes evenly.
  49. > His rust-red hair has gone long since you saw him last, but he still looks so similar to the first time you saw him, fourteen years before he killed you - albeit far older.
  50. > He was just a kid then, after all.
  51. > You have to face him.
  52. "You're back."
  53. > "I can't ever stay away forever. I have to see them from time to time."
  54. > You grunt unhappily.
  55. > "I thought you've made your peace with me?"
  56. > Rolling your eyes, you start for the door again.
  57. "I've accepted I was wrong. That doesn't mean I'm glad to see you yet. Coming in?"
  58. > He pauses, then nods.
  59. > Stepping in, you head to the kitchen.
  60. "Are you going to be staying long?"
  61. > He shakes his head. "I just want to see them again. See how they're doing."
  62. > You pass him a glass of water.
  63. "Why? You know they'll never fly again. Yours can't even boot up anymore."
  64. > "I know, but I can still feel them. Always. Almost like they're alive."
  65. > You suppose they were, in a way, for what they were.
  66. "Well, I don't plan on going anywhere. I'll always be here watching over them."
  67. > "You don't ever plan on building a life?"
  68. > His comment provokes you to give him a stark look.
  69. > "My life is over; you know that. My reason for fighting is gone."
  70. > You can sense he disagrees, but doesn't provoke you further.
  71. > Turning and walking back out of the kitchen, you motion him to follow you.
  72. "Alright. They're downstairs still. This way."
  73. > You open a heavily-locked, thickly built door at the back of your home.
  74. > A dimly-lit stairway descends away under the mountainside Canterlot is built into.
  75. > Wordlessly, you grab a lantern and start down.
  76. > He follows.
  77. > The cavern at the bottom is enormous, carved out in some distant age past.
  78. > Unnatural light of the crystals lining the walls and ceiling gently illuminates it.
  79. > In the center of the pit sits the mangled remains of your arrival, twisted and fused into permanent embrace.
  80. > He stares at them, unblinking and silent.
  81. "They're not going anywhere, see? Not even rusting."
  82. > Tearing his eyes away, your killer looks at you again. "I see. I'm sorry for bothering you again."
  83. "What will you do now? Go out travelling again?"
  84. > "You know I've always been a bit of a loner."
  85. "Except when my sister was involved."
  86. > He is silent. That might have been uncalled for.
  87. > Turning for the exit, he pauses and looks back at you. "When I come back, where will you be?"
  88. > Your gazes meet. They're not friendly friendly, but are peaceful.
  89. "Doing what I've always done: Protecting the things I love."
  90.  
  91. > A long time after he leaves, you keep staring down into the wreckage below.
  92. > Two incredible machines, bound up in their death throes.
  93. > One is barely recognizable anymore, a twisted mess of ruined metal. Only fragments still display the signature red paint.
  94. > The other is white and black, still recognizably human if cripplingly broken from your spectacular collision with this strange world.
  95. > Even now, they both still hum with the remnants of the energy that had stopped Axis and brought you here - an energy as alien and foreign to this world and yourself.
  96. > The princesses had them moved here one it was clear neither of you were going to be able to leave.
  97.  
  98. > A soft brush of air on your hand drags your attention, incorporeal fingers across your skin.
  99. > Another presence makes itself known to your mind, but this one is welcome.
  100. > You smile, a soft and warm smile full of love. She is here.
  101. "You didn't say hello to him."
  102. . . .
  103. "He'd still like to hear from you."
  104. . . .
  105. "I know."
  106. . . .
  107. "When will I move on?"
  108. > You laugh a bitter, pained laugh.
  109. "It's not so easy for me, love. I might be free of my war at last, but..."
  110. > You motion to the wreckage in the pit.
  111. "...I cannot let go of my deeds so easily."
  112. . . .
  113. "Luna? We are more alike than she understands. Both so different, so rare among our kind."
  114. . . .
  115. "I've been thinking of flying again. I could put together an airplane without to much trouble, I think. Put together a team again."
  116. . . .
  117. "I know it'll never be the same, but it's closer to the stars than on this earth. My heart's always been out there."
  118. . . .
  119. "I know, Lalah. I'll be coming all the way to you... in time."
  120. > The presence fades, but you stay with the wreckage a bit longer.
  121. > Eventually it's time to go.
  122. > The stairs ascended, door locked again, and dinner prepared.
  123. > You eat, but your mind is elsewhere.
  124. > Among the stars.
  125. > You can't help it. It's who you are, after all.
  126. > A brotherly guardian.
  127. > A vengeful son.
  128. > A pilot.
  129. > [spoiler]A Red Comet.[/spoiler]
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