BlueDragon's Initiate Review

Hey there! :3

So firstly, terrain. You have some nice terrain on the land, but underwater, you could have some raised areas of the ground. It's a little flat down there. Also, on the land island, I'd recommend putting some more block types in with the sand (maybe birch wood, endstone, grass etc)
I would also expand on the island some more, just because you have a bit too much of the plot taken over by water, unless you want to make some kind of water organic (dolphin/shark etc)

Secondly, organics. I like the trees a lot! They're really cool and fit with the theme of the plot nicely!

Lastly, structure. You have a very small amount of structure on the island. You definitely need some more before you can rank! I know the general theme is supposed to be like an abandoned island, but you're going to need some more detailed structure. A little hut in the corner of the island could be cute, or a boat structure (not like the dingy)

Good luck!
- Dutty :3