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- Novice Review:
- Really cool plot so far, very original and creative HOWEVER; there is a few things i would like for you to work on:
- First off, the table seems a bit too skinny to carry its own weight, so buff up the legs and top a bit and maybe give some detailing to the legs and around the lip of the table to make it seem more real,
- the fishbowl is really cool, but since its the main focus of your plot, id really like to see it taken to the next level! Puff the fish out to make them more of a 3-d organic, rather than just a pixelart x3
- Also to make up for the lack of terrain, you could probably do a bit in the bowl instead of leaving it clean at the bottom!
- Best of luck!
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