Tayter_Kat

Interupt

Jul 21st, 2015
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  1. Hello Interupt, Its your daughter Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot....
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to castles to market stalls. Your structures are Great!!! They have good depth and they look appealing, so Great!!!!
  5. Organics:
  6. THIs is anything living, like trees and animals. You have good trees, but I feel like they should have leaves. Maybe add some that match the theme you chose. The trees are bare and I don't think it fits, even though it looks decent on the plot. the trunk looks great, just add leaves.
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. Your terrain is perfect for Aspirant, SO that is a big plus here!!!
  9. Other:
  10. This is anything that does not fit into the previous three categories. The main thing that was bugging me, mainly why I didn't promote, is that you have a lot of open areas all around your plot. These areas could be used for smaller structures of more trees. IT looks unappealing that there are a lot of bushes all over, but not a lot of anything else. If you add smaller ideas, like wells, a small farm, houses, etc. it would look as though it was meant to be instead of a random castle on top of a cliff.
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  12. Good Luck Adoptive parent<3333
  13. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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