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DuttYGilberT

Anyday's Novice Review

Jul 5th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain. Loving the palette! I would suggest keeping grass in with the /grass/ palette however. That way you can add 'decoration' to the plot, like grass, flowers, ferns etc. Also, your flatter terrain needs more layers because, like I said, it's a little too flat as it is. Adding more layers adds to the atmosphere! As well as the decorations.
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  5. Secondly, organics. You don't have any on this plot apart from a couple bushes hanging over the cliff. These look nice, but they're not enough. I think custom trees would look really nice also hanging over the cliffs. Or animal organics, in the sky or on the ground, would also be really nice! Maybe plants/flower organics too! You could make a lily pad on the water?
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  7. Lastly, structure. Your structure looks really lovely! You have great detailing and nice shapes, but I do think the clay area of the larger building needs some detailing on it. As it is, the clay just makes the walls look a little plain without any detailing - even just some basic detail would be so much nicer than leaving it plain. I don't think I need to explain to you how you could detail the walls, however, as it looks to me like you're pretty good at building already!
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  9. Lovely plot though, really! :D
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  11. Good luck!
  12. - Dutty :3
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