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- Overall doesn't seem like much of the English script is affected. It's mostly minor fixes on JP's side.
- JP script comparison (old on the left; updated on the right): www.diffchecker.com/qpSawR6n
- Format:
- Episode-Battle
- Old JP line
- NA line
- --> Updated JP line
- --> Describing what was changed
- 1-1
- かずみ: 必ず海香とカオルは この街に来る…
- Kazumi: Kaoru and Umika will definitely come to Kamihama.
- --> かずみ: 必ず海香とカオルは この町に来る…
- --> Changed the kanji for "city" (街 to 町)
- 1-2
- かずみ: ふたりを探して神浜市内を 歩き回っているんだけど… この街でもムズムズっとしちゃうんだよね…
- Kazumi: So I've been walking around the city, trying to find them... But this whole place is crazy!
- --> かずみ: ふたりを探して神浜市内を 歩き回っているんだけど… この町でもムズムズっとしちゃうんだよね…
- --> Changed the kanji for "city" (街 to 町)
- (No script differences in Ep2 at all.)
- 3-3 (Context for most of these is that Kazumi makes food for Hinano to get her out of her slump, and the food names are puns.)
- かずみ: ポットドッグです！
- Kazumi: Yeah, it's a wiener!
- --> かずみ: ポットデルドッグです！
- --> Added デル to match the pronunciation of the pun (「アイデアが ポッと出るドッグ」 / "An award wiener's idea")
- かずみ: ポットドッグ、サラスパ そしてワックルです！
- Kazumi: A wiener, noodle salad, and cake!
- --> かずみ: ポットデルドッグ、サラスパ そしてワックルです！
- --> Added デル to match the pronunciation of the pun (「アイデアが ポッと出るドッグ」 / "An award wiener's idea")
- かずみ: ポットドッグ、サラスパ ワックルです！
- Kazumi: Weiner, noodle salad, cake!
- --> かずみ: ポットデルドッグ、サラスパ ワックルです！
- --> Added デル to match the pronunciation of the pun (「アイデアが ポッと出るドッグ」 / "An award wiener's idea")
- かずみ: わたしも、ポットドッグで 閃いたこと、あるんですよ！
- Kazumi: I've had some great ideas after eating hot dogs myself!
- --> かずみ: わたしも、ポットデルドッグで 閃いたこと、あるんですよ！
- --> Added デル to match the pronunciation of the pun (「アイデアが ポッと出るドッグ」 / "An award wiener's idea")
- [For consistency, maybe change hot dogs to weiners. Though it doesn't change much of the meaning either way.]
- かずみ: こちらこそすいません！ ありがとうございます！
- Kazumi: Thank you for everything!
- --> かずみ: こちらこそすみません！ ありがとうございます！
- --> Changed い to み (JP typo fix)
- 3-4 (Context for these is that Hinano said she heard/saw Kaoru at a park, so Kazumi rushes over there and is hoping to meet up with her.)
- 牧 カオル: あたしは、牧カオル！ よろしく!!
- Kaoru: I'm Kaoru Maki! Nice to meet ya!
- --> 牧 カオル: 「あたしは、牧カオル！ よろしく!!」
- --> Added quotation marks.
- かずみ: …はぁ～…入違ったのかな…
- Kazumi: *Sigh* She must've already left...
- --> かずみ: …はぁ～…入れ違ったのかな…
- --> Added れ in between 入 and 違 [NA line seems fine to keep.]
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