Bad Btch snoot game

from /snoot/ - Fang Friday Your future wife and daughter Edition
h ttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/43487273/#43488098
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hey /snoot/, examanon here

It might be a little early, but I won't have a lot of time today so I'd like to drop the continuation of BBSp3:
h ttps://ghostbin.com/CBC0V

Plus another paste with only the last few scenes, cause the story is getting way too f-king long (it's around 20k char now):
h ttps://ghostbin.com/5RevC

I don't want to spoil things, but in these scenes Anon's depression arc finally hits the climax (I mean the entire concert) - not coincidentally after meeting Fang. Naturally I still have quite a few twists to pull off, but all the suffering that led up to this point pretty much culminates here. In any case though, as always, I'd be thankful for any and all feedback. So please, let me know what you guys think. (I'd especially be interested to know who's rooting for Fang, and who for Stella?)
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Oh, another thing. There are very obvious - and a few less obvious - references to certain songs in the story. I'm sure someone has noticed this already cause they're almost 1:1 lyrics copypastes, but for added effect I recommend actually putting these songs on as you come across them, both to amplify the mood and as subtle foreshadowing for what kind of themes to expect in the following scenes.
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Thank you man, can't wait to read it in my free time
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I have read this and have no fucking idea where are you going with it.
I mean what next? Fang will kill Anon to "make it rgiht"? Will Fang convince Anon into su cide pact? Or ask Anon to cheat with her?
Or the lamest option - Anon breaks up with Stella and goes back to Fang like break-up never happened?
I have no idea what happens next due to not listening to music too often, so I have no idea what references you have made.
(also I root for Stella. The idea of "Anon immigrates to France to join Stella" resonates to me strongly)
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I just want to say I admire your dedication to posting updates every fang friday, Ive got two stories only a few thousand words from finishing that could have been done weeks ago that I just havent found the time for.
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can you link part 1?, I want to read it.
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It is here
h ttps://archiveofourown.org/works/32305663/chapters/80077378
The fact that OP STILL does not link to ao3 is f-king annoying.
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>>43489298
Thanks anon. It's kind of a habit for me by now, so I don't see it as a chore. Plus I enjoy writing these scenes.

>>43489287
h ttps://archiveofourown.org/works/32305663/chapters/80077378

>>43489213
>have read this and have no f-king idea where are you going with it.
I can't tell if you mean this in a good or bad way. I gotta say though, the stuff I have planned is *none* of your guesses in this post. At least not in the short them. By the end? Who knows. :^)
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thank you
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>I can't tell if you mean this in a good or bad way.
I have no idea myself.
I kind of expected Fang part to be some sort of conclusion to the series with some sort of epilogue as part 4. But I guess you plan another 10k words into this.
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Yeah, I've thought about doing some restructuring also. I don't want to split the thing up into multiple chapters though (not even 2.5 and 3, or 3/1 and 3/2), cause there are things from the very beginning of p3 that I'll circle back to, and I think it would hurt the reading experience. Plus the "chapters" here could very well be separate installations or short stories, both because of the differences in style and because they all could be complete without having a sequel. Also, there's a timeskip between each part.

When you think about it though, not a lot has happened in p3 yet, it's only verbosely worded. Especially when compared to p1. Barely a week has passed within the story, with some days almost entirely skipped over. It was mostly all to establish Anon's current situation with school and work, and with Stella. The pot then been stirred on both fronts, while still being connected. Pretty much everything is up in the air right now, and having a cliffhanger ending of this magnitude is not something I'd do. Even more so when you consider that the penultimate goal is to see Anon graduate(?) and be reuinted(?) with Stella(?). And that's a whole schoolyear distance away.