xDraghun

Woodspammer Plot Review

Jul 18th, 2015
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  1. Hello Woodspammer!
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  3. My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Not much to say because you are lacking 2 major parts, but lets start with your structures first.
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  5. You houses are lacking detail, depth, and color. Try pushing in the walls for depth, adding stairs/slabs for detailing, and other blocks that compliment the main block for color. Refer to /warp depthtutorial for extra help. Your market stands a pretty nice but are just as plain as your houses. Your walls are also plain and lack everything your houses lack.
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  7. You have absolutely no organics on your plot. Organics are things such as trees, flowers, statues (excluding player statues), animals, etc.
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  9. You terrain has nothing on it except a cobblestone floor, and a small bonemealed patch on the side. Try adding hills/mounatins/rivers to your terrain.
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  11. Overall, your plot needs a lot of work done to it before you can rank up. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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