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- Novice Review:
- Cute plot, but theres some stuff i think you could work on before ranking up!
- The trees are good, but theyre generally all the same size except for the big one and the 3 little ones, so try to add more variation to the them :)
- The structure is decent, though try and use just full blocks for the roofs. Keep the stairs and slabs for details :)
- If youre going for a smooth roof though, i would recommend using dark oak stairs to better match your roof. The front detailing is nice and it shows depth, but the back is a little more flat then it should be, so try and work on that. Also, break up the windows with some supports or something! It doesnt make much sense to have a wall supported by windows x3
- Your floating island is good and i like your attention to detail with the ores, walls and vines. Also its good to rough it up a bit to make it less unnatural and smooth!
- The terrain on the lower level of the plot is generally all flat, so try and add some hills or dips in the terrain to give it more definition!
- Good luck!
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