BHA4 Judging - DJ Medoroa

Wish's BHA4 Judging - Unworldly Manifestations
-=DJ Medoroa's Entry=-

Rubric:
-20 points per pattern - 10 points to creativity and pattern aesthetics, 10 points to fun factor and pattern design.
-30 points towards general aesthetics, sound, and polish.  (For the record, *average* aesthetics is essentially the defaults per engine, and is at around a 6/10 per category)
-(Usual contest-specific bonuses will be omitted due to contest theme being OCs lol)
At the end, the total points will be divided by the total possible points, and then multiplied by <contest average> to get your final score.

Nonspell 1: 10/20
Trivial to dodge, looks ok.
7/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 3/10 - Fun/Design

First Dream "Gap of Fairyland": 13/20
Shockingly hard, it's...fine.
7/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 6/10 - Fun/Design

Nonspell 2: 10/20
Same problems and strengths as non 1
7/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 3/10 - Fun/Design

Sweet Dream "Sorcerer's Paradise": 13/20
Very neat looking, but it's pretty boring to dodge the small, dense stuff.
8/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 5/10 - Fun/Design

Nonspell 3: 10/20
Slightly less trivial to dodge if you know bubble hitboxes, kinda boring honestly
6/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 4/10 - Fun/Design

Spicy Dream "Ognevushka": 11/20
Isn't this basically just one of Salamimaru's spells?  It's fairly fun
5/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 6/10 - Fun/Design

Nonspell 4: 12/20
Better to dodge, ok looking
6/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 6/10 - Fun/Design

Salty Dream "Otohime's Somnliloquy": 11/20
Isn't this just an AJS Junko spell?
5/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 6/10 - Fun/Design

Nonspell 5: 9/20
What in the world happened to the kunai on this non...?
Anyway it's really obnoxiously hard, but it looks fascinating
5/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 4/10 - Fun/Design

Savory Dream "Seven League Boots": 14/20
Indicator looks cool, pattern looks fine, dodges fine
7/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 7/10 - Fun/Design

Nonspell 6: 10/20
Different from the other nons, but kinda boring and less visually interesting
5/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 5/10 - Fun/Design

Bitter Dream "The Transient Match Salesgirl": 15.5/20
Good dodging, fun idea
7.5/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 8/10 - Fun/Design

Nonspell 7: 8/20
Similar deal to non 5 but the star underneath doesn't really add much of anything
4/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 4/10 - Fun/Design

Otherworldly Bubble Magic ~Five Li in a Dream~: 14/20
VERY long survival but it's got a good amount of variation
7/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 7/10 - Fun/Design

"Fantasy Crossing": 11/20
It's fine, it looks nice too, pretty boring to dodge though
6/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 5/10 - Fun/Design

AESTHETIC: 23/30
Looks: This is really high quality for a GameMaker engine, really solid.  You can totally improve it too 9/10
Sound: Sound is average 6/10
Polish: Honestly what continues to astound me is the quality of this engine, but there are a few quirks.  Overall though there's extra dialogue and other little touches 8/10

SUM OF PATTERNS: 171.5/300
AESTHETIC: 23/30
TOTAL: 217.5/330 * 25 = 16.47/25

To be 100% transparent with you, this was one of the last scripts I judged and I *massively* ran out of steam as a result.  Sorry, there's a lot of patterns and my critiques ended up being *far* less detailed.
Overall the script is pretty solid throughout with its own highs and lows, though I think there's massive room for improvement.
I'm still incredibly fascinated by your engine and want to see it improve too!