Tayter_Kat

ItzBlueEyes

Jul 14th, 2015
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  1. Hallo there ItzBlueEyes, its Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your initiate plot....
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to barns. Your tower is alright, but its lacking depth. Depth is the layers within a building that gives it more realism. You can add depth by adding slabs, trap doors, stains, fences, and buttons to the sides or incorporated to the walls. If you need an example, you can do /warp depthtutorial. It shows you examples of good and bad depth.
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like trees and animals. You have trees, but they are notch trees (bonemealed saplings). BE creative and try to build your own trees. Make sure the trunk isn't to skinny and flows well. Also make sure the leaves and trunk are proportional instead of the leaves looking nigger or vise versa.
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. Your terrain is very very flat. Try adding some hills, cliffs, craters, etc. to it to make it stand out more. make sure the ground is smooth instead of boxy.
  9. Other:
  10. This is anything that does not fit into the previous categories. You do not have a pallet to your plot. A pallet is the blocks you use to create a build. They all match theme, like nature or modern. You have a random blocks. IF you choose some sort of nature theme, you would use a lot of blocks like wood and stone. Modern consist of quarts and stained clay. These are just examples. Your plot as random blocks all over, so try to stick to some blocks that match a theme.
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  12. Good Luck<333
  13. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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