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-Who thought Steel team need a mega to be a real treath?
+Who would have thought a Steel team needed a mega to be a real threat?
-Steel type is a really good type with a lot of coverage.
+The Steel type is a really good type with a lot of coverage.
-Aegislash's ban is useless when you can use Doublade, he is THE counter to Terrakion, Mega-Medicham and any physical fighting sweepers.
+Aegislash's ban is useless when you can use Doublade, it is THE counter for Terrakion, Mega-Medicham and any other physical fighting sweepers.
 
-So the cc was Doublade-Bisharp, ok, no problem, this core is just great.
+So the Challenge was: Doublade-Bisharp, this core was great.
-They are 2 wonderfull Pokemon i like to use.
+These are 2 wonderful Pokemon I really like to use.
 
-First, Bisharp, as everyone knows can defeat psychic team alone after 1 Sword Dance, so you've already 10% of the metagame you can check, it's good, very good.
+First, Bisharp, as you already know can take on psychic teams alone after 1 Swords Dance, so you've already covered 10% of the metagame, which is very good.
-And for Will O Wisp, just put a Lum Berry or switch on Heatran, second option is nice because you've Flash Fire actived.
+And in case of a  Will O Wisp, just put a Lum Berry on it or make the switch to Heatran, second option is nice because you can get Flash Fire actived.
-Bisharp's set is classic, so i won't say anything on it.
+Bisharp's set is classic, so i won't say anything further.
 
 Next we talk about one of my favorite steel Pokemon: Doublade.
-Have an immunity to Fighting is great, ok, Skarmory is too here but immunity is better for Scarf fighting moves.
+Having an immunity to Fighting is great, I know, Skarmory is too here but immunity is better for say, choiced mons that are locked into a Fighting move..
-He can easily resist to Bisharp Knock off and 0HKO him with Sacred Sword, an usefull move for many case (Bisharp, Normal Type, Rock,...). And when you get the opportunity to set up your Doublade with Sword Dance, your opponent can be afraid cause he sees that the lost is coming.
+It can easily take a Knock off from Bisharp and 0HKO back with Sacred Sword, which is a very useful move for many cases (Bisharp, Normal Type, Rock,ETC.).
-Shadow Sneak is a big treath too for psychic and ghost (especially Gengar who is a pain for steel sometimes).
+And when you get the opportunity to set up with Swords Dance, your opponent should be afraid since they see that their end is coming XD.
 Shadow Sneak is a big threat for Psychic and Ghost (especially Gengar which can be a pain for steel sometimes).
-Heatran, the steel Pokemon  everyone use in steel team to have this big advantage of fire immunity.
+
-Mine is special defensive with Toxic to rekt Volcarona by example (HP Ground can't 0HKO this Heatran), Charizard-Y too,...
+Heatran, Which everyone uses for the fire Immunity.
 Mine is specially defensive with Toxic to check Volcarona. (For Example: HP Ground can't 0HKO this Heatran, Charizard-Y, ETC.)
-Skarmory, ok, it's current, but Skarmory without Whirlwind isn't.
+
-I don't need this move because i can easily kill physical sweepers when they set up, instead i put Spike to counter all steel team, Ground team cause Stealth Rock are useless there.
+With Skarmory, I have Stealth Rock and Whirlwind for them setup sweepers, or just to spam it after hazard stack is set up.
-Brave Bird to have a move to counter fighting type and M-Loppuny cause Doublade have some issues with it cause M-Loppuny get Scrappy as ability.
+Brave Bird to counter fighting types and M-Loppuny, since Doublade has some issues with its Typing & Ability.
 
-Ferrothorn, this set was old, i use it for Greninja in the best cause he could resist to HP Fire Stabbed of this frog.
+Ferrothorn, this set is kind a old, I used it for Greninja because it could take a STAB HP Fire from it.
-So, he is usefull against ground and water, 2 weaknesses of steel.
+So, it is useful against Ground & Water, 2 of Steel's weaknesses.
-My set is based on Leech Seed, it's a good core with Heatran to be honnest to stall my opponent.
+My set is based on Leech Seed, it forms a good core with Heatran to stall my opponent.
 
-And the last Pokemon, i wanted test it because i didn't play it a lot in steel team is Magnezone.
+And for the last Pokemon, I wanted test it because I didn't get to play it much in Steel teams before: Magnezone.
-Why do i play it?
+Why did I use it?
-→ Ballon → Sand Rush Excadrill can be rekt with Arena Trap.
+→ Ballon → Sand Rush Excadrill can get rekt with Arena Trap.
-Like others Steel Pokemons like Skarmory, Scizor,...
+Even trap other Steel Pokemon like Skarmory, Scizor, ETC.
-I use it too for Keldeo, i can tank 1 Secred Sword and i can 0HKO him with Thunderbolt.
+I used it for Keldeo too, it can take 1 Secret Sword and 0HKO him with Thunderbolt.
-To be honnest, the only good thing with this challenge core is i've discovered how to use Magnezone and especially how to use it well.
+To be frank, the only good thing I got from this challenge is that I learned how to use Magnezone well.
 
-So, be #5 in ladd without mega means steel is a powerfull type and they don't need all these broken mega (Mega Lucario, Mega Mawile, MEga Metagross) and Aegislash/Genesect too.
+Being #5 on the ladder without a Mega means steel is a seriously frightning type and they don't need all the broken megas they got
 (Mega Lucario, Mega Mawile, Mega Metagross, ETC.) nor Aegislash/Genesect.
-People who want them in steel team are just lazy to built a good team and look for easy win.
+
 People who want them in steel team are just too lazy to build a good team and are looking for an easy win.
-Well, i hope you've loved this RMT guys and see ya for perhaps Normal RMT...
+
 Well, I hope you've enjoyed this RMT guys and see ya for my next one!
 
 
 
 Bisharp @ Lum Berry
 Ability: Defiant
 EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
 Adamant Nature
 - Sucker Punch
 - Knock Off
 - Iron Head
 - Swords Dance
 
 Doublade @ Eviolite
 Ability: No Guard
 EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 Def
 Brave Nature
 IVs: 0 Spe
 - Shadow Sneak
 - Swords Dance
 - Gyro Ball
 - Sacred Sword
 
 Heatran @ Leftovers
 Ability: Flash Fire
 EVs: 248 HP / 8 Def / 252 SpD
 Calm Nature
 IVs: 0 Atk
 - Earth Power
 - Lava Plume
 - Toxic
 - Protect
 
 Skarmory @ Rocky Helmet
 Ability: Sturdy
 EVs: 248 HP / 252 Def / 8 Spe
 Impish Nature
 - Brave Bird
 - Whirlwind
 - Stealth Rock
 - Roost
 
 Ferrothorn @ Leftovers
 Ability: Iron Barbs
 EVs: 248 HP / 100 Def / 160 SpD
 Impish Nature
 - Leech Seed
 - Thunder Wave
 - Protect
 - Power Whip
 
 Magnezone @ Air Balloon
 Ability: Magnet Pull
 EVs: 124 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpA / 128 Spe
 Modest Nature
 - Volt Switch
 - Thunderbolt
 - Flash Cannon
 - Hidden Power [Fire]