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+Dear typesetter,
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-Cosmos Pro took Chihaya-chan away from us.
+CosmoPro took Chihaya-chan away from us.
-Is it really okay this way?
+Are things really okay like this?
 
-<She should have returned by now, yes?>
+<She should have returned by now, right?>
-I just can't get in her way.
+I can't just get in her way.
-<I would no longer be able to meet with her.>
+<We would no longer be able to see her.>
-Of course, achieving her dream is more important.
+Because, her achieving her dream is more important.
 
 But deep inside, you want her to come back, don't you?
 
 
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 ...n
-...san
+...-san
 
 Haruka-san!
 
 Are you okay?
 
 Y-Yeah. What is it?
 We've arrived
 
-<20: The final piece>
+<20: The Final Piece>
-At Cosmo Pro agency HQ.
+At CosmoPro agency HQ.
 
 
 
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-Keep out!
+Get out!
 
 Excuse me! Is there a girl named "Kisaragi Chihaya"...
-I don't know her!
+I don't know!
 
 Hey, can you at least listen to what we have to say?
-Right, nano.
+That's right, nano.
 <ow ow ow>
-<That's because we got here on impulse>
+<That's because we came here on impulse>
 
-There's no helping it. We have no methods to contact anyone inside.
+It can't be helped. We have no way to contact anyone inside.
 
 What are you guys doing over there?
 
 
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-May I have a second? I'd like to talk to an authority in CosmoPro...
+May I have a second? I'd like to talk to someone in charge at CosmoPro...
 This guy!
 
 Yet another useless attempt
 Just leave
 
 Hey! You...
 
-If I'm not mistaken, you must be the producer of Chihaya-chan.
+If I'm not mistaken, you must be Chihaya-chan's producer.
 Ehhh!?
 
 Please tell us where Chihaya-chan is now!
-I'm sure you know that!
+I'm sure you know!
 
 
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 I beg you!!
 I have to give her something for her own sake!!
 
 Follow me
 
 
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 <Studio 1>
 Ah, Sasamoto-san, good mornin...
 !!
 
 Everyone? Why are you...
 
-Didn't you promise me to keep this a secret?
+Didn't you promise me you'd keep this a secret?
 Yeah... that was my plan, but...
 
 Chihaya-chan...
 
 
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 In this recording studio...
 
-She is working her best as a CosmoPro idol.
+She is doing her best as a CosmoPro idol.
 
 After I hand her these fan letters
-I may never her again...
+I may never see her again...
 
 C'mon, Haruka!!
 
 
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-Ermm
+Umm...
 
-Because 765Pro can't do any work
+Because 765Pro can't get any work
 Our fans have been worried about us a lot
-And so we've received loads of fan letters.
+And so we've received lots of fan letters.
 
-Look! you've got this many
+Look! You've got this many
-... And
+...And
 
-We want to hand them to you face to face.
+We wanted to hand them to you face to face.
-So here we are.
+So, here we are.
 
 
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-Take it
+Here
 
-Th...Thank you
+Th... Thank you
 
 
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-What are you doing, Haruka?
+What's the matter, Haruka?
 Sorry...
 
 I hate this...
 Eh?
 
-Haruka-san
+Haruka-san...
 
 
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-I'm well-aware that Working at CosmoPro
+I'm well-aware that working for CosmoPro
 is the best option for Chihaya-chan.
 
-Your dream of singing the song that only belongs to you
+Your dream of singing the song that belongs only to you
 will be granted here for sure
 
-However
+
 I hate to imagine 765Pro
-with anyone missing.
+with someone missing.
 
-I apologize for saying this out of selfishness,
+I apologize for saying something so selfish,
-But ...
+
 
 
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-I absolutely hate to see 765Pro
+I absolutely hate seeing 765Pro
 Without Chihaya-chan
 
 Haruka...
 
 Wait...
 But I...
 
-Chihaya-san, you're so horrible.
+Chihaya-san, you're horrible.
-Transfering to CosmoPro without telling anyone
+Transferring to CosmoPro without telling anyone
 That's so wrong. [Too serious to attach "nano" here]
 
 H-Hold on!
 
 
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-I'm not transfering anywhere!!
+I'm not transferring anywhere!!
 
 Eh...
 
 Ahh
-I admit that I was scouting on Kisaragi-kun
+I admit that I was scouting Kisaragi-kun
 But...
 
 I was flatly refused.
 
 Heh?
 
 
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 So you heard it from Urara...
 Y-Yeah...
 
 Harurun, you got tricked completely!
 See? See?
 Stop it! I'm the victim!!
-My president said he may want to expand the company.
+
-And he probably got the wrong idea when I told him I was recruiting Kisaragi-kun.
+My president said he wanted to expand the company.
 And he probably got the wrong idea when I told him I was scouting Kisaragi-kun.
 
 It's all my fault.
 You don't have to apologize!
-But if you rejected his offer, then why did you come to this studio?
+
 But if you've rejected his offer, why did you come to this studio?
 There has to be a reason behind it.
 That's because...
 
 There's nothing to hide anymore.
 
 
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-He recruited me, but I rejected.
+
 He tried recruiting me, but I rejected.
 
 Nevertheless, we had several discussions afterwards
 And he offered to write me a personal song that I'll never get from anywhere else.
-But after that news report on RF incident
+
-I was so afraid someone would find out that I'm in a business with a person from CosmoPro
+But after that news report on the Rookie Festa incident
 I was so afraid that someone would find out that I'm in business with a person from CosmoPro
 
 And that's why you kept it quiet from everyone
-My head was full of the thought that I'm going to get my own song
+
-It all has to do with my egoism. I'm truly sorry.
+I was too busy thinking about how I was going to get my own song
 This all happened because of my egoism. I'm truly sorry.
 
 
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 Harurun!?
 
 Haruka, are you alright!?
 
 What a relief
 
 I feel so relieved
 
-What did you do?
+
 What happened to you?
-How come you have wounds all over the place?
+
 Why do you have wounds all over yourself?
 Eh?
 
 
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 Now that I think about it, she was so worn out when she came to me.
 So you went everywhere to give everyone these letters by yourself.
 
 Even though you had a hard time as well...
 Eh...
 
 Big thanks to Haruka, nano!
 Thanks so much, Haruka-chan
 Thank you.
-Stop it. I did nothing...
+
 Stop it. I didn't do anything...
 No
-I was happy to hear a word from you.
+
 I was happy to hear those words from you.
 Thank you, Haruka.
 
 
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 164
 
-What?
+
 O-
 Our own song!?
-Yep,
+
 Yep. Would you let me write one for you?
-Would you let me write one for you?
+
 What kind of light would be emitted from blending all the different colors everyone has.
-What kind of lights would be emitted from blending all sorts of different colors everyone has.
+
 If we get to sing, then...
-If we get to sing, then
+We'll get a concert too!?
-We'll get a concert too!
+
 
 A live performance would be great!!
-A live performance would be awesome.
+Yeah! We all wanna do it!
-Hurray! We all wanna do it!
+No, that's...
-Well, that sounds great, but...
+
 A concert?
 If you guys are serious about it, then please allow me to collaborate as much as I can.
 ...
 
 Accepted!
 This is such a rare opportunity.
 Whatever budget we have, we'll show that we can make it work!
-Whatever budget we have, we'll show that we can make it!
+
 But
 I wonder if anyone will come to see us...
 
 
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 That's right...
-You could be right...
+They'll see us as a scam on television.
-They will see us as a scam on television.
+
 What nonsense are you guys talking about?
-What nonsense are you guys saying?
+
 They're here.
 
 Our precious fans
 Who have expressed their feelings to us
 
 
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 Dear everyone who sent us a fan letter,
 
 We, the 765Pro idols,
-We, 765Pro idols,
+Have regained our motivation thanks to your supporting voices
-Have regained our motivations from your supporting voice
+
 Now it's time
-Now it's our turn
+To give you in return
-To give you back
+
 A wonderful moment
 To spend together with us,
 
 
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 765Pro Allstars,
-765Pro All Stars.
+Will wait warmly for your attendance.
-Will wait for your attendance affectionately.
+
 I see
 All that's left now is to wait for the real performance.
-So what's left now is to wait for the real performance.
+
 Yes
 We owe everyone for their support.
-I owe everyone's support to make it happen.
+
 Now...
 
 
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 Maybe I should finish my last job.
 
 Sasamoto-kun is with 765Pro now?
 Got it. I'll try to contact him.
 
 Sasamoto-kun...
 
 What's your reason
-What's your objective
+