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| 1 | Hello Project_Repeat! | |
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| 3 | My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structure. | |
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| 5 | - | Tbh I couldnt find it at first. Then i saw it under the leaves xD. Its weird how the roof of the structure is made of leaves. Its like all the leaves from your trees were taken and made into the roof of your structure which is a little creative :D. Your structure has some decent depth but not really any detailing. refer to ./warp depthtutorial for help. |
| 5 | + | Your structure has some decent depth but not really any detailing. I suggest that you make your structure bigger so you are able to add more detailing to it. refer to ./warp depthtutorial for help. The roof is a little flat aswell. |
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| 7 | - | Your trees have some really nice branches. I love how they're custom made too. Try to make them taller though based on all the branches it has. Also try adding roots for a more realistic effect. Its ok if you cant since u have so many branches. |
| 7 | + | Your trees have some really nice branches. I love how they're custom made too. Try to make them taller though because the branches seem a little crowded. |
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| 9 | - | Your terrain is pretty guud and I like how you added birch wood for variation and contrast. The cactus are a nice touch as well. |
| 9 | + | Your terrain is pretty guud and I like how you added birch wood for variation and contrast. The cactus are a nice touch as well. Your hills are pretty decent. |
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| 11 | - | Overall, your plot looks nice but needs a little more work done before I can rank you. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D |
| 11 | + | Overall, your plot looks nice but needs a little more work done before I can rank you. My biggest issue was your structure so u might wanna change it up. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D |
