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xDraghun

Project_Repeat Plot Review

Jul 28th, 2015
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  1. Hello Project_Repeat!
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  3. My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structure.
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  5. Your structure has some decent depth but not really any detailing. I suggest that you make your structure bigger so you are able to add more detailing to it. refer to ./warp depthtutorial for help. The roof is a little flat aswell.
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  7. Your trees have some really nice branches. I love how they're custom made too. Try to make them taller though because the branches seem a little crowded.
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  9. Your terrain is pretty guud and I like how you added birch wood for variation and contrast. The cactus are a nice touch as well. Your hills are pretty decent.
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  11. Overall, your plot looks nice but needs a little more work done before I can rank you. My biggest issue was your structure so u might wanna change it up. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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