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- Hello Project_Repeat!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structure.
- Your structure has some decent depth but not really any detailing. I suggest that you make your structure bigger so you are able to add more detailing to it. refer to ./warp depthtutorial for help. The roof is a little flat aswell.
- Your trees have some really nice branches. I love how they're custom made too. Try to make them taller though because the branches seem a little crowded.
- Your terrain is pretty guud and I like how you added birch wood for variation and contrast. The cactus are a nice touch as well. Your hills are pretty decent.
- Overall, your plot looks nice but needs a little more work done before I can rank you. My biggest issue was your structure so u might wanna change it up. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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