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Cute Anthology 3


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Welcome back,
Master♪

どうぞ
This way
My name is Clarice.
Today we're having a maid cafe at the church♪

Church Rebuilding Maid
by: Kongaripasuta


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No one's coming to the church?

Yes.
It's quite a serious problem...

If this continues... supporting the church will be the least of my worries...
ひとり礼拝。。。
One person service...
およよ。。。
*sob* *sob*
I may not be able to feed myself properly...

Does anyone have any good ideas...?
よよよ。。。
*sob* *sob*
うーん。。。
Hmm...
How about we do what we did before!

Maid outfits!
めいど
Maid

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１目限定メイド喫茶in教会
The first maid cafe at the church
おまちしております♪
We'll be waiting♪

And so began the Church Maid Cafe Event
Thanks to everyone it was a big success!

Fufu, isn't it great that a lot of people came?
ちょうはずかしいけど。。。
This is really embarassing though...
Yeah... We're working hard too, but...

おまたせしましたー
Sorry for keeping you waiting
Clarice-san really seems like a maid...
おかわりはいかがですか。。。
Would you care for another cup...?
She has elegance and presence...
Everyone has their eyes on her~


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Miss Maid~

Yes, I'll be right... Ah!

Sachiko-chan!
と、まゆちゃん加奈ちゃん！
Mayu-chan and Kana-chan too!
かわいい。。。
Cute...
こんにちはー
Hi~
Fufu, we came for a visit!

You're running a maid cafe. It's unfortunate if my cute self isn't here.
見えない。。。
I can't see her...
衣装をカスタマイズしたんですよ！
I customized this outfit!
まあ。。。
Oh my。。。
Why is
a customer wearing maid clothes!?

Leaving that aside
I'd like to request your original menu, Clarice-san!

オリジナルメニューですか？
Original menu?
パフェすごい盛り方してくれたり
Like a massive parfait
まぁブナンなとこで
Oh my, how perfectly done
さちこ
Sachiko (on omelette)
オムライスに名前かいてくれたり
Or omelette-rice where you write my name on it
ボク　メイドさんならではのメニューが楽しみなんです！
Being a maid, you must have an exciting menu!
まぁ　なければ得意料理でもかまいませんが。。。
If you don't have one, I wouldn't object to a special dish...

Mayu's interested too
メイドさんの
A maid's...
意中の男性を悩殺するめにゅー。。。！！
menu to captivate the guys...!!
I'll take notes also!


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This must also be part of working for the church...
I understand!

My dish for those who have entered a righteous poverty..
a rice bowl of rice!
Rice bowl of rice!?

Something tasty + something tasty, my speciality born from logic!
後光
Halo
かのおいしいもの＋おいしいものこちょうおいしいもの理論
Something tasty + something tasty makes something ultra delicious logic
すごい！！
Wow!!
Low cost and packed full of energy!
Guys are sure to love it too!

I-I understand  your sentiments, but
I can't eat this much...
炭水化物の宝石箱ですか。。。
A treasure chest of carbohydrates...


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You're not going to finish it!?
Then I shall!
麦も入っていないんですよ！？
There's no barley in this too, you know!?
気品
Elegance (crumbling in background)
What a sad-looking maid...

しあわせ。。。
This is so nice...
アハハハハ。。。
Ahahahaha...
They like it...

I can't lose to this...!
Let's also increase our appeal!
みなみ決めます！
Minami knows what to do!
Yeah!

Reina-sama's handmade onigiri!!
At least take off the plastic!
またごはんか！！
More rice!!

I made a parfait rice bowl!!
負けたくない！！
I don't want to lose!!
You're competing with each other!?
丼はもういいですって！！
Enough with the rice!!


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Oh no~
I tried to carry the tea with my racket but it spilled!
Why use your racket!?
ブッコミすぎでしょう！！
This has gone too far!!

Phew~
It's the afternoon
There's fewer customers, isn't there~

Even with that number, it seems like there'll still be results.
Shall we give it another go?

You're right... if we give it another go, what we'll need is...
Personality!


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I've been in the world of celebrities since I was young, so I know...
What's important is a personality that leaves an impression!
ナース喫茶
Nurse Cafe
ツンデレ喫茶
Tsundere Cafe
こっち見んな
Don't look over here
妹喫茶
Imouto cafe
お兄様～
Onii-sama~
ウサミミ喫茶
Bunny-ears Cafe
If we did a Tsundere Cafe, that would be an easily identifiable personality...
I think just being at the church is enough...

I've got a good idea!!
おおっ！？
Oooh!?

Miss maid~
Coming!
あ、みなさん！
Ah, everyone!

A Devil Cafe!!


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デビル仕様。。。
Devil design...
When did this...
The time for fun ends now.
Starting now, Reina-sama's legend will begin!!

Your order, young lady?
A...A soda...

Here's your devil soda!!

This thing is huge.
It has a funny smell too.
It's spicy.
It's an infamous soda from Okinawa where you put things like tabasco into it...


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Devil Ultra Spicy omelette-rice!!
It's hooot!!
Devil refrozen ice cream parfait!!
Hard like a rock!!
Devil cooled down ramen
It's cold!!

You're right, Reina-chan...
もらった
Given this
Your strong personality
will forever glow in the hearts of the customers... as a traumatic experience...
We have to stop her then!!

Hey, Reina!
また悪さしてーっ！！
You're doing evil things again!!

Gah! Hikaru!!
何故ここに！？
Why are you here!?
なんだ　なんだ
What's happening now?
I'm here to protect the peace of the world!

U-Um... Could the maid and idol stop...

This is no good... Everyone's caught up in the chaos...
光の必殺技痛いのよーッ
Your finishing move hurts, Hikaru
まてーっ
Come back
I need to do something to calm everyone down...
But what should I do...

Something... that I can do...
Something...
that I can do


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This is... a hymn?
It's lovely...

この美しい歌は。。。？
What is this beautiful song...?
いい声ね～
What a nice voice

When did this big crowd appear!?
It was supposed to calm everyone, but it did the opposite...!?
Well

I guess I didn't have to worry about the church
after all...


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数日後。
A few days later。

Isn't it great that a lot of people are coming now~!
こんにちはー
Hello
のんにちはー
Good day
Yes♪ It's all thanks to you all.
Now I can relax a little.

...is what I'd like to say, but
because I got caught up in the moment and sang those songs...

There are a lot of people who would rather hear the sister's singing rather than the service~!
シスターさーんはやく～
Sister-san, come on~
おうたうたって～
Sing a song~
うたって～
Sing~
An odd expectation from a church...
Right~?
どうしましょう～
What should I do~

アーッハッハ
A-ha-ha
Instead, I'll put on a show for you!!
レイナサマ踏んでー
Reina-sama, step on me
ワアアアア
Yeaaaah
There are hardcore fans here too!!