Nayaase - You Can't Teach Love (Twilight, unfinished)

>Just a normal day in Canterlot High
>You’re Professor Anon, also known as the youngest teacher to be hired in the school, in your mid twenties, as you walk to your assigned classroom
>You can hear from the corridors the scandal your students are making
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dFRmTd_LUps
>As you reach to the door, some noticed your arrival, quickly sit down
>Others follow them as the classroom is silenced quickly
>As you make your way to your desk, you salute
“Good morning Professor Anon” they answer back in chorus
>You’re about to sit in your chair, but you can’t help to notice something… strange
>The classroom is quiet… too quiet
>As you decide to get away from your chair to the board
“I know all of you are excited because of summer break, but…” you say as you start to write an exercise with the chalk “There’s still time for learning. Who wants to come forth and answer this?
>You can see as two people at must raising their hand
>Typical, you think as you roll your eyes
”The one who can answer it will have extra credits in the final exam!”
>As you expected, almost everyone raise their hand
“Let’s see… Miss Rainbow Dash!”
>The jock is caught in surprise
“Huh? But I didn’t raised my hand”
>You only stare at her in silence, in the end she ends up in front of the board reluctantly
“You have 3 minutes to answer this problem, starting now”
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vXGhvoekY44
>After 3 minutes of blankly staring at the board, Rainbow Dash gives up
>A couples of giggles towards her are coming right up

“Wrong, wrong Miss Dash” you say in a kinda dickish way “Go to my chair, so you can see closely how to do it right”
>You scan across the room to meet with the perfect student for this situation, as a very annoyed Dash was walking to your desk chair
“Miss Twilight Sparkle, please come forth”
>The mentioned girl only managed to stand up, with a very bright smile in her face, always ready to resolve some exercises
>As she heads to the front, a very high pitched scream steals the attention from everyone
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xn6hhrX34Pw
>No other than Rainbow Dash, jumping out from the chair while rubbing her buns
>Just as you thought, a couple of tacks in your chair
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lwxu5VHWvjw
>Laughter just overflows the room
“I hope you’ve learned your lesson Missy” you can’t help a shit-eating grin covering your face “No pranks to the teacher”
“W-what? How do you…?
>http://i723.photobucket.com/albums/ww237/andrew_cullen/forum%20pics/T1000.gi
“I’m not that far from your age lady, I know how you guys think”
“Professor! It’s ready!”
>You turn your head to the board, to find out the exercise was already resolved
“Excelent job Miss Sparkle; now please, both of you return to your seats”
>Twilight smiles again, as she gives you back your chalk
“Now, open your books in the page…”

>The day pass without any inconvenience
>10 minutes before the end time you announce the main news to the teens
“Let me remind you, the test is in the next week”
>You hear a lot of groaning and such
>”So please, use your time in study, and not making dumb pranks okay?”
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=etYxWVun34Q
>Dash only blushes as she makes a pout; it looks like her butt isn’t the only thing hurt

>The ring bells as the students left the room, you decide to stay to check the few homework delivered to you
“Oh uhm, excuse me?”
>You raise your head to find out those violet eyes of Twilight Sparkle staring directly at you
“Can I help you with something Miss?”
“W-well you see, I have a little problems understanding these exercises”
>Now that’s strange, ever since the beginning of the year, Twilight Sparkle has been a very bright and intelligent girl, kinda awkward in the social sense but still a very good girl
“Sure, no problem” You say as you invite her in to your desk
>Twilight just grins again (Boy, is it you, or does she smile a lot when it comes to academics?)
>Hours fly as well as the exercises, as you explain very carefully every time Twilight have any questions.
>Funny enough you never seem tired of answering her questions, as she have a genuine hunger for learning. Why other students can’t be like her
>Little did both of you notice is almost the sunset
>Twilight starts to freak out, as she looks at the hour in her cellphone
“omygosh, omygosh, my mom is going to kill me, I need to go now”
>Even if Canterlot is not known for the crime of insecurity, you can’t just leave a girl walking alone in the almost night
>As both of you are walking in the sideways of the street she thanks you for helping her and escorting her at home
>You just answer that is no problem, you have some free time and it’s also your pleasure
>The night is now present, as the lights are surrounding the city, quite a spectacle to be honest.

“You seem to be also fascinated by this too” Twilight Sparkle comments
>You nod, as you think that you don’t go outside too often… maybe, just maybe it would be nice to hang out more
“I like to watch the city at night too” Continues Twilight “It reminds me a lot when me and my brother used to hang out when we were little”
>A brother? Interesting, she’s so quiet when is not about school and here you are listening a little of her backstory in such a light hearted mood
“Really?” you asked interesting “tell me more”
>Soon you knew about her parents, his brother and her soon to be Sister-in-law, you listen fascinated all of her stories, and how still, she manages to keep an incredible grades
>In less than you realize, Twilight is ringing a bell, which you assume is her house.
>Geez! This is a very well-off area, maybe mid-high class. With this kind of life is hard to believe she’s not a bratty kid, thank god
>A very gorgeous woman opens the door; the look alike to her daughter is amazing
>You can’t help but feel a heavy stare on your shoulders, courtesy of the woman. Damn, so that’s how your students feel when you stare at them
“I am so sorry to be this late mom” Twilight interrupts the stare of her mother, thank god “Look, he’s my teacher, and I’ve been talked to you about him”
>wait wut
>Now you see how Twilight mother is staring at you even more, almost as she’s scanning you and analyzing you
>After some eternal minutes, the lady reincorporates, offering you her hand
“Pleased to meet you professor Anon E. Mous, my name is Twilight Velvet”
>You correspond to the handshake, soft but firm, as you have to be with a lady

>As you reach to the door, some noticed your arrival, quickly sit down
As you reach for the door, some of them noticed your arrival and quickly sit down
>as the classroom is silenced quickly
as the classroom is quickly silenced (just sounds better)
>As you decide to get away from your chair to the board
So you decide to avoid your chair and make your way to the board
>You can see as two people at must raising their hand
All you can see is two people raising their hand
>"The one who can answer it will have extra credits in the final exam!"
"The one who can answer it will receive extra credit for the final exam!"
>As you expected, almost everyone raise their hand
>As you expected, almost everyone raises their hand
>“Let’s see… Miss Rainbow Dash!”
it feels like you are missing a sentence before this one. something like the sentence below should go there
>You scan the room for a brief moment before you see the perfect candidate.
“Let’s see… Miss Rainbow Dash!”(something like that)
>The jock is caught in surprise
The jock is caught by surprise
>“Huh? But I didn’t raised my hand”
"Huh? But I didn't raise my hand!"(the exclamation point gave the sentence more life)
>You only stare at her in silence, in the end she ends up in front of the board reluctantly
You only stare at her in silence and in the end she reluctantly goes up to the board
>A couples of giggles towards her are coming right up
A couple of giggles can be heard in the room due to Dash's recent failure
>“Wrong, wrong Miss Dash” you say in a kinda dickish way “Go to my chair, so you can see closely how to do it right”
"Wrong, wrong, wrong Miss Dash" you say in a kinda dickish way. "Go sit in my chair so you can have a front row seat on how to do it right."

>You scan across the room to meet with the perfect student for this situation, as a very annoyed Dash was walking to your desk chair
You scan across the room to find the perfect student for this situation while a very annoyed jock was walking to your desk chair
>“Miss Twilight Sparkle, please come forth”
You then find the one who you were looking for.(something along those lines to show how he found her)
“Miss Twilight Sparkle, please come forth”
>The mentioned girl only managed to stand up, with a very bright smile in her face, always ready to resolve some exercises
The mentioned girl excitedly/happily stands up, with a very bright smile on her face, always ready to resolve some exercises
>No other than Rainbow Dash, jumping out from the chair while rubbing her buns
The scream came from Rainbow Dash, who was jumping off the chair while rubbing her buns
>Just as you thought, a couple of tacks in your chair
Just as you thought, a couple of tacks on your chair
>Laughter just overflows the room
Laughter explodes from the room
“I hope you’ve learned your lesson Missy” you can’t help a shit-eating grin covering your face “No pranks to the teacher”
“I hope you’ve learned your lesson Missy” you say with a shit-eating grin covering your face “No pranks on the teacher”
i have two problems with this.
1. how did he know it was her?
2. if it was her she would know there were tacks on the chair and sweep them off. It makes anon look like a prick for just assuming that she was the one who did it
>“W-what? How do you…?
“W-what? How did you…?"
“I’m not that far from your age kid, I know how you guys think”
>“Excelent job Miss Sparkle; now please, both of you return to your seats”
“Excelent job Miss Sparkle, now please, both of you return to your seats”
>“Now, open your books in the page…”
“Now, open your books to the page…”
>The day pass without any inconvenience
The day pass without any more inconveniences

>10 minutes before the end time you announce the main news to the teens
10 minutes before the end of class you announce the main news to the teens
>“Let me remind you, the test is in the next week”
“Let me remind you, the test is next week”
>You hear a lot of groaning and such
You hear a lot of groaning and grumbling/moaning/sobbing/whining/sighing (anything really. >and such is just lazy writing. use a thesaurus)
>”So please, use your time in study, and not making dumb pranks okay?”
”So please, use your time wisely by studying and not playing dumb pranks okay?”
>Dash only blushes as she makes a pout; it looks like her butt isn’t the only thing hurt
>Dash only blushes as she pouts in the corner/her chair/etc. it looks like her butt isn’t the only thing hurt
>The ring bells as the students left the room, you decide to stay to check the few homework delivered to you
The bell rings and as the students leave the room, you decide to stay to correct the few homework assignments delivered to you
>You raise your head to find out the violet eyes of Twilight Sparkle are staring directly at you
>“W-well you see, I have a little problems understanding these exercises”
“W-well you see, I am having a little problem understanding these exercises and i was wondering if you could take the time to explain them to me”
>“Sure, no problem” You say as you invite her in to your desk"
>Hours fly as well as the exercises, as you explain very carefully every time Twilight have any questions.
Hours fly by as the exercises are completed one by one, as you explain very carefully every time Twilight has any questions.
>Funny enough you never seem tired of answering her questions, as she have a genuine hunger for learning. Why other students can’t be like her
Funny enough you never seem to tire of answering her questions, as she has a genuine hunger for learning that most students do not posses. Why can't they all be like her?

>Little did both of you notice is almost the sunset
You check the clock and find that it is almost sundown.
Wow Twilight, we spent the whole afternoon going over problems and its almost twilightdusk!
>Twilight starts to freak out, as she looks at the hour in her cellphone
Twilight starts to freak out, as she looks at the time on her cellphone
>omygosh, omygosh, my mom is going to kill me, I need to go now”
“omygosh, omygosh, my mom is going to kill me! I need to go now!” (remember what i said about punctuation)
>Even if Canterlot is not known for the crime of insecurity, you can’t just leave a girl walking alone in the almost night
Even if Canterlot isn't known to be dangerous after dark, you can’t just leave a girl walking alone by herself. So you offer to walk her home which she gladly accepts
>As both of you are walking in the sideways of the street she thanks you for helping her and escorting her at home
As you are walking on the sidewalk she thanks you for helping her by escorting her home safely
>"You seem to be also fascinated by this too” Twilight Sparkle comments
You seem to be fascinated by the night” Twilight Sparkle comments
>“I like to watch the city at night too” Continues Twilight “It reminds me a lot when me and my brother used to hang out when we were little”
“I like to watch the city at night too” Continues Twilight, “It reminds me of when I used to stay up with my brother"
>A brother? Interesting, she’s so quiet when is not about school and here you are listening a little of her backstory in such a light hearted mood
“Really?” you asked interesting “tell me more”
A brother? Interesting, she’s so quiet when not talking about school and here you are listening to a little of her backstory in such a light hearted mood
>“Really?” you asked interesting “tell me more”
“Really?” you ask interested in her family “tell me more”

>Soon you knew about her parents, his brother and her soon to be Sister-in-law, you listen fascinated all of her stories, and how still, she manages to keep an incredible grades
>Soon you knew about her parents, her brother and her soon to be Sister-in-law. You listen fascinated by all of her stories. (that last part felt out of place)
>In less than you realize, Twilight is ringing a bell, which you assume is her house.
Before you know it, Twilight is ringing a bell, which you assume is to her house.
>Geez! This is a very well-off area, maybe mid-high class. With this kind of life is hard to believe she’s not a bratty kid, thank god
Geez! This is a very well-off area, maybe mid-high class. With this kind of life its hard to believe she’s not a bratty kid, thank god
>A very gorgeous woman opens the door; the look alike to her daughter is amazing
A very gorgeous woman opens the door, she looks so much alike her daughter that its almost uncanny
>“I am so sorry to be this late mom” Twilight interrupts the stare of her mother, thank god “Look, he’s my teacher, and I’ve been talked to you about him”
“I'm so sorry to be out this late mom” Twilight says as she interrupts the stare of her mother, thank god “Look, he’s my teacher, the one I've been telling you about
>Now you see Twilight's mother is staring at you even more, almost as if she’s scanning and analyzing you
>After some eternal minutes, the lady reincorporates, offering you her hand
After some long awkward minutes, the lady recuperates, offering you her hand