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R*Novice Review: Kmatejka

Jun 17th, 2015
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  1. Novice Review:
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  3. Nice plot so far, but theres a few things i think you should work on before you can rank!
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  5. Your terrain is decent, but other than the hill in the corner of your plot, theres not much else! Try to give your terrain more variation and make it more dynamic.
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  7. Your structures are okay, but theres only two of them and theyre relatively small. Maybe make them a bit bigger and more complex. Also adding more structures around the plot could be very beneficial.
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  9. Your trees are good, but perhaps having a higher percentage of air in your brush when doing the leaves, would make them a bit fluffier and more tree-like.
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  11. Overall, decent plot, but work on it a bit more before you can rank :)
  12. Good luck!
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