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  1. Hi there
  2. My name is FoodLovingPanda and I will be reviewing you
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  4. This review will be divided into three sections: Terrain, Organics and Structure and I will explain each section separately, so let us begin
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  6. TERRAIN:
  7. Your terrain is clashing with itself, you have a nice grassy area on one side of the river and then desert on the other. When making terrain try to keep in mind that where there is water (even in desert) there will be some plants (grass, small flowers and bushes) but that expands to both sides of the river. I would suggest you to make it more realistic by putting some grass around the river and then slowly and gradually turn it into a desert. Something that i think would be better if you just smooth out the terrain a tiny bit
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  9. ORGANICS:
  10. You need to work on your organics still. Your tree trunk looks too square. Try and break it down a bit so it does not look so stiff, and to do that it would be best if you think about using curves in your organics and not straight lines. Also you will need to make your tree top much larger. Add much more leaves and use actual leaf blocks for the most part as they are transparent and they give that lightness that you see in trees when you look at them.
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  12. STRUCTURE:
  13. I see that you have a well in the desert that really looks like the ones that are spawned in with the game code. I would suggest you to make a structure of your own as well so that your plot has more elements.
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  15. Have fun building
  16. -FoodLovingPanda
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