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Jewsef

BenjiStan's review

May 28th, 2015
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  1. Hey this is Jewsef and I'll be reviewing your plot.
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  3. First of all, I see that you put some effort into building your plot. However it lacks some stuff. For example, the structure does not have any depth or detail and the roof looks very uninteresting. Also, the structure on the corner is useless and has no point in existing. The trees are okay but they look squarish, and the tree in the middle is just a bark and leaves, add some branches and stuff. You can work more on the terrain because i can see the world edit edited in it fix it with your hand and make it more natural + some of the things on the terrain shouldn't be there, like that random water puddle and that door.
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  5. Hope this helps, good luck! :D
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  7. ~Regards, Jewsef.
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