Under Arachne
>will get stuck. Arachne are immune. You
The line is too long and ends up being ontop of the border of the textbox

Slime -> Healer is OP as fuck. It takes 30 minutes to heal a person, but with this you can ressurect a dead person in a minute. That's 30x as fast, and infinitely more powerful.

Under Harpy, Carry, 5th line
>Your stamina will sem (sic)
Should be "seem"

Under Succubus, 4th line
>exagerated (sic) than humans typically get
Should be "exaggerated"
Under Hypnotist, third line
>your hips and acting sulty (sic)
Should be "sultry"

UnderKitsune, 8th line
>also just have naturally quiet movement
I think you want to pluralize movement.

Under Alraune, Uprooted, 1st line
>You can go three as long
You want to add "times" between "three" and "as"

Under Forst-woman, Blizzard, first line
>Forgot (sic) a light flurry
You mean "Forget"

Under Undying, 5th line
>he (sic) undying are zombies
You mean "the"

Under Holstaur, Motherly, 5th line
>someone you believe (sic) care for is
Do you mean "truly"?

Under Aquarius, 5th line
>small ammounts (sic) of water
You mean "amounts"



Page 2
Intro, line 3
>the various ristricts (sic)
Do you mean "restrictions" or "risks"?

Gignatism, line 8
>not (sic) that slimes do not get injured
You mean "note"

Revival, last line
>you won't be brought back agian (sic)
Yo umean "again"

Extra Special, 6th line
>or that naturally high (sic) a lot of energy
You either mean "that naturally have a lot of energy" or "that have naturrally high amounts of energy", or something else

Experience, 4th line
>allows (sic) you
you mean "allow" (the prior line has "will" as the primary verb (sorry, I don't know the English term))


Page 3
Intro, line 10
>allowing you to carry bigger, beter (sic) ones
You mean "better"

Under Infantry squad, third line
>your second-in-command in (sic)
You mean "is"


Page 4
Intro, line 1
>All that's left if (sic) to find your place
You mean "is"

Natalie Thompson, 8th line
>your base ship-shape
Do you mean "in-shape"??

Melody Shepherd, 4th line
>total erradication (sic)
You mean "eradication"

Sarah Goodman, 3rd line
>the lives our (sic) people
Either "the lives of people" or "the lives of OUR" people

Brute,6th line
>they're bascially (sic) humanoid
"basically"

Potbelly, 1st line
>These a (sic) large
"are"