Didn't do my running commetry post since the posting issues, so I'll keep it short (ish).
Overall much more impressed, several points I was about to critisize were quickly resolved the next moment.

Surprised Oniyura is standing as well as it did- considering it's half built. Even Mountin Glenn looked like a bomb hit it- most of the town seems untouched. Not even bird nests or the buildings collapsed in on themselves.
I loved Weiss singing (I am a sucker for Casey Lee Williams), but they could have shown more of the "show" to show us how well she sings overall, and before the show to show her nerves/reluctance (though the look on her face after did that. Less is more I guess). Song sounds surprisingly dark or bittersweet considering it's about I'm not giving up. I'm probably missing more foreshadowing (if this is something they've kept after Monty passed)
I think the glasses guy Jacques was talking to is from Team Four Star. Not sure. If they bring in more ''decent'' amateur talent- I'm all for it.
They're building up Jacques to be an asshole- almost too perfectly. Seeing "bad dad" trope again with no new twist is boring. I'm half expecting him to be working for Salem directly or one of her minions.
> Great job comparing the girl to the memorial to destruction. Also, if you're Marigold- why aren't you wearing anything marigold colored? The naming convention exists for a reason. Also, this guy seems like a bastard child of Mercury & Neptune.
> No fingernails in close-ups are creepy.
I also find the jack-ass not knowing what happened an impossibility. Their version of the internet + telephone system went down. I guess the rich would have their own short-range back-up, but even this rich-boy must have heard his parents talking about it- or anyone! COnsidering the event is to raise money/unite people, ''someone'' at the event should have mentioned it. Even the introduction to the concert should have said "we're here tonight for [blank]." It's even on the ''fucking sign'' in front of the painting. Even him being a closed-in idiot would make sense. "I've been out of the kingdom- what happened?" - it'd then give Weiss her chance to retell it in her own words, and show the audience what hurts her most about it.
It's doubly frustrating when you think they had other excuses. He could have been combined with the blonde haired woman's role. (Though it does serve to give Weiss a smaller outburst before the larger, so her progression of anger makes more sense.)
> What the fuck is with the asshole in the background. We know they're rich assoles here, we don't need another to home in the point. Not to mention it was blink and miss it, and served no other purpose. (Other than uselss conversations like Weiss says, but it's volume isn't loud or faint enough, so we're not sure if we're supposed to ignore it or pay attention. I dunno, maybe it's suppose to illustarate the useless conversations but more subtly.
Surprised Weiss' first reaction didn't get anyone to look. But again, I was expecting the douchebag to be the only incident. Actually really like the scene- only critisism is that they should have let us hear snippits of the useless conversations before making it a sea of noise- but it's very minor.
Didn't expect Weiss summoning to be fueled by anger. Genuinely surprised. Also like Ironwood being a voideof reason, but I'm shocked he didn't stay to defend Weiss (if not from other guess, then certainly her father- for as long as he could).
> Inception Bwaaaaaaaaah
Tyrion missed a chance for a sneak attack, something I'd have thought would be right up his street. But I really like his fight- albeit I wish it was faster (surprised Ruby didn't warn Nora so she at least could still be on her feet after the power up. No need to surprise us- we know she can take it. Against an opponent you don't know, don't take risks- Tyrion could have just curb stomped Nora while she was on the ground. Yes she gets a sneak-attack in, but they didn't know Tyrion would take his eyes off her). Still hate how he laughs too much. His laughter could have been more sinister if it was saved for key moments.
> And it isn't ironic. They just shot their team-mate instead oh him. That's it.
**Oh, Tyrion is a Faunus. Did not expect this. I was expecting a scorpion motif, but not an outright scorpion.**
> Don't attack one at a time you retards! And get up! It's not like they're exhausted or disabled.