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- Chapter 8 – Which Came First: the Chicken or the Max?
- The eyes of the crew were glued to the window as they watched the end of one of theirs.
- The Red October drove a straight, fast course for the base of a mountain.
- Then it touched.
- The world stood still.
- The crew held their breath.
- An empty boom echoed through the water.
- Pebbles from the damaged mountain drifted through the water, to the ocean floor.
- Little cracks spread over the sub’s body like a dropped eggshell.
- The submarine’s nose crunched and compressed.
- The world began to rumble.
- The Nautilus crew could feel it too.
- It was imminent destruction.
- Chunks of concrete, fragments of metal, and shards of glass flew through the interior.
- In the control room, the rubble triggered something: an electric energy that was surging through the entire sub.
- There was a half-second of silence before all the energy was released as light and sound.
- The generated heat dissipated into bubbles in the water, rising quickly towards the surface while pieces of the mountain hurried down.
- One explosion triggered the next until nothing remained.
- The Nautilus exploded in chaos.
- “What the hell just happened?”
- “The Red October…”
- “Why did it suddenly…?”
- “Pollak was…”
- “I can’t believe he…”
- “Alex is actually dead…”
- “I have a feeling that wasn’t a mistake…”
- “It wasn’t.”
- “Somebody else must’ve killed him.”
- “It was NAD.”
- “Well, who is NAD?”
- “Who would want to kill Pollak?”
- “Cedric…”
- “It wasn’t me, I swear!”
- “We’ll you’re the only one who knows how to control the…”
- “There are two other captains and Pollak is one of them!”
- “Yeah, but Pollak wouldn’t kill himself…”
- “If I could have everyone’s attention!”
- Appropriately Named Handsome Stranger Ranon Cox was wearing his detective hat again.
- The hall fell silent.
- “We need to stop accusing each other,” he said, finally.
- The crew looked puzzled.
- “What?”
- “Why?”
- Ranon sighed.
- Was no one else noticing this?
- “All of the suspects keep dying.”
- Ranon paced the hall, surveying the remaining crew.
- “This NAD guy only kills who we think he is.”
- “No,” Max pointed. “If that were true, I’d be dead by now.”
- Ranon gave him a deeply pitiful look.
- “I think I know who he is… And if I’m right, he’s just saving you for last.”
- Max tried to keep that shiver from running up his spine.
- Upset, he managed to stammer, “Who is it?”
- “I don’t know for sure, but…”
- “Who do you think he is?” Max demanded.
- Ranon frowned.
- “I don’t think I should say.”
- Max frowned.
- “Well, I think I know who he is too.”
- He took a step forward.
- “And maybe you’re next.”
- Ranon looked at him now, eyes narrowed.
- “Is that a threat?”
- Max threw his hands up in defense.
- “No, man! All I’m saying is be careful!”
- “Why would I need to be careful?”
- “You’re trying to crack this case.”
- “That’s because I’m probably the most logical guy left.”
- Aside, Cedric shook his head in protest.
- “Your investigations are taking you where NevAlDe doesn’t want you to go.”
- “And how would you know where NevAlDe doesn’t want me to go?”
- Max and Ranon glared at each other, suspiciously.
- “Hey, guys?”
- The crew looked down the hall, where Max stood, near the escape chute.
- “What’s going on? What did I miss?” he called.
- Ranon was the first to look back to the Max he had been arguing with.
- Of course, that Max was no longer there.
- “What the fuck, Max?” V shouted.
- “What did I do?” the real Max called, his voice cracking.
- “And where have you been this whole time?” Cedric inquired, suspiciously.
- “I was at… the Mess Hall,” Max stammered.
- The crew stared at him in disbelief and Max stared back at them, wide-eyed.
- “I was hungry!” he tried to explain. “I had all these chicken sandwiches I was going to eat and…”
- “Fat-ass,” Cedric mumbled under his breath.
- “… but I didn’t get to eat any of them! It was the earthquake! I fell down the stairs!”
- “You fell… down the stairs?” Cedric repeated in disbelief.
- “It keeps happening!” Max squawked.
- Patrick erupted in frustrated declarations.
- “I WARNED YOU, DOG! I TOLD YOU ABOUT THE STAIRS!”
- Max whined.
- “Eating chicken is hard…”
- Ranon was deep in thought.
- Too deep for you.
- “This one’s the real Max,” he mused.
- “What?” the Other Max squawked.
- “But he--!”
- “How do you know?”
- Ranon was thinking too loudly to hear them.
- “Now there’s only… I need to find…”
- He walked off, too pensive to continue.
- The crew watched him go, completely confused.
- Max looked around, still baffled.
- “So, guys?” he asked. “What just happened?”
- NAD paced down the empty hall, shaking his head, miserably.
- “An underwater earthquake?” he thought aloud. “How stupid is he?”
- “I could take you in a straight up fist fight. Definitely.”
- NAD turned to face El Mysterio.
- “That was a nice move back there,” he congratulated him. “Crashing the sub, killing Pollak, being Max…”
- El Mysterio was silent, confused, as if to say, “That wasn’t me; I didn’t do that…”
- NAD chuckled pleasantly.
- “I know, I know, that was me.”
- He smiled.
- “But I’ll let you take credit for it, though… if you want…”
- El Mysterio still didn’t respond.
- NAD figured he was here to talk about a fistfight and a fistfight only.
- That was so typical of materialized electrical energies.
- Unless their creator was manipulating them at the time, they couldn’t do anything more than what they were assigned to do.
- El Mysterio, or EM (who NAD was tempted to call “Emma”)’s current task was to challenge NAD to a fistfight.
- NAD resolved to give him a response.
- “If you want to, I guess,” he smiled. “When are we talking?”
- Emma didn’t respond.
- Instead, he vanished.
- NAD watched him go and wondered who this mysterious “el” was.
- Actually, he wasn’t very mysterious.
- He was more… strange.
- And it’s too bad he was wearing a mask.
- NAD bet he was handsome, too.
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