CageCreeper's Aspirant Review

Hey there..

I understand that you are going from a scene from a series. I understand that it would be annoying to change, however, like I said, saying something is 'based on' shows so much more creativity than copying identically.
There are aspects in this build that are not passable for the Apprentice rank. Please read my first review again.
Failure to do so, and re-submission of your plot without change can result in a temporary ban and a plot clear.

- Dutty