Fritz Westmyn changes

1-1
- I played around with various versions of the scene where Fritz meets Reika. I settled on what you see there, as less is more felt the best.

1-2
- Fritz was originally going to get whiteout that he left in his dorm, but I changed this when I made a map of the place, and ended up putting the dorms and lake on opposite ends.
- The bad/spoiled food thing was recycled from an earlier version of the script. I re-added it to give more conversation points, and for an amusing excuse in 1-3 as to why Fritz might not have been able to go to the washroom (since they'd be all tied up with sick people).
- The conversation Fritz, Reika, and Thatcher had went through a number of iterations. A few of these included Reika and Thatcher talking about their dreams, them talking a bit about their past at Fritz' request, them just catching up, etc. I chose to shuffle it all around and just keep in Thatcher's bit about Coordinating, however.
- Tied into the above, a specific reason for Thatcher's lack of stamina was immediately given, but had to be removed once that detail was removed from that scene as well.

1-3
- I was going to reveal the reason for Fritz being disliked by the teachers in full right here, but I decided to play it down for a while, hinting at it and introducing it later at the part's end.
- Fritz was originally conceived with short hair. I changed it to long hair in-planning after I realized that given something in the narrative, it didn't make sense.
- There was a dropped scene in Part 11-1 where Fritz explains to a random person just what Mr. Wippleman meant when explaining the Eevee. I moved it to here to fill space out.

1-4
- Originally Fritz described the Tactics class specifically as a high school gymnasium.
- The battle changed a bit when I changed Fritz' Nidorino to a Nidorina. Namely, it uses Double Kick after the jumping kick instead of Fury Attack. Everything else remained the same...
- ...except after the battle, where I used the chance to give her a little more personality. In the end, I liked the change.

1-5
- Nothing went unused.

1-6
- I did write device entries for Zubat and Golbat, though decided the more logical place to introduce the device was later.
- Check them out here: http://pastebin.com/Kr0EQRes

1-7
- There was a removed scene here where Fritz' actions in Socials are explained in a little more detail; him having met three people whose relationship reminds him of his with Reika and Thatcher - although he admits he may have just been reaching. I removed it because it seemed truly pointless and didn't fit the narrative to put them in.
- The "mountain cavern" was the beta name for Abet's Bluff. I use it because hey, not everyone can remember the names (also exemplified by Fritz). On another note, it was originally Abet's Rock; I changed it because bluff sounded cooler.
- [i]"Mostly because I knew a guy who usually did that."[/i] - This was a last-minute line added to make it clear that Fritz isn't a marathon runner, even though he does know a few concepts.

1-8:
- Originally Fritz was going to shove open the double doors. However, fire safety regulations - something that Dean Howard does follow - require the doors to open outward. Hence, he has to yank them open.
- This scene was developed in a unique way. Elyna Dragomir is a cameo character from AiedailEclipsed. Since I was having trouble writing this scene, my idea was to have someone else write it with me! Ergo, we RP'd this up.
- It was originally shown that Mrs. Shugiri isn't fond of Aporon's group in this scene. Why was never explained.
- Fritz did a little more looking stuff up in the original draft.

1-9:
- I had two dropped conversations here. The first was Fritz explaining to Reika and Thatcher about what had happened to him, and the second was the full version of the conversation mentioned in the last two paragraphs. Both were dropped for conveying information that was already conveyed.
- In addition, the conversation about Moldeau Town was moved from at the start of the walk to at the park.
- This scene was originally going to transition into a battle between a young couple and Reika and Thatcher, but I had to drop it because it just didn't fit with their mood.
- Carlie, Irene, and Andrew were originally not going to appear here. I put them in to give more faces to Reika's harassers.

1-10:
- Before all the worldcrafting was done, Fritz would've looked for Aporon instead of Lawrence. The result was the same, but different - he would've been "out like a light in a compromising position", clearly suggesting it was more out of a drunkedness.
- Originally the flames spread further when the water made contact; I changed this when I researched and learned that's not how Class D fires work, and subsequently changed a few bits
- The school part was originally cut here!! But I changed it.

2-1:
- A few lines of text were recycled from 1-1 and 1-5.
- Mr. Gruff makes his formal appearance here after getting dropped from 1-9.
- I dropped a small funny statement because it broke up the flow of dialogue; after "I've seen drunken bums with nicer clothes than you." Fritz remarks he didn't just make that up. This would indirectly reveal another member of the Traveling Hobos - Boozer.

2-2:
- The Four Ps were originally going to be introduced here. Fritz would have a snarky response that he sees a different set of Ps: "pretention, pedanticness, pretextation, and PISSING-ME-OFF"

2-3:
- The Big Contest was originally here, but I decided to give it a bit of delay.

2-4:
- I was caught between simply having Fritz do a summary of the events after the fact and actually showing them. I settled on the latter, mainly for the sake of showing the teachers again. Although this is the exact reason for the chapter's long length - I couldn't split it up, either, since all the logical split points were in odd spots.
- The second scene almost didn't make it. I only kept it because it reinforces how Fritz doesn't pay attention to Reika going up and down stairs at first.
- William and his two friends (Miles and Reginald) are recycled from an early version of 1-7's script, just to give a little more life.
- The explosion was moved all over the narrative. I decided it fit best here, though.
- I trimmed the descriptions of the Pokemon down to about two-thirds the length.

2-5:
- The first scene almost didn't make it. Almost was a shame.
- There was originally a scene here setting up the plan for the day, but I decided to not show it for effect.
- Originally, Fritz and Thatcher were going to go with the others. However, given what actually happens, he'd kind of be leaving whoever behind (or they would be present to ruin the moment at the end). So it just had to be the two of them. Which isn't bad, since it gave the two time to interact together.

2-6:
- I originally thought to reenforce Eevee's shift by having Nidorina try to pick a fight with it, but decided it was too awkward.
- There was a dropped scene here where Fritz and Reika visited the principal, in the former's attempt to aid the latter. He would talk the Dean into planning to install elevators at a future point (unfortunately way after Reika's leg heals), but Finkerton would have business to attend to before they could talk about anything else.
- There was a dropped aspect where Fritz would find out - mostly useless information - from one of Premala's admirerers. He would've ruined the peace of a relationship with Premala in Fritz' eyes, however - as well as messing up the scene directly. So it never came to be.
- Originally, there was a small exchange between Fritz and Reika before what they went into. Instead of Fritz mentioning so, Reika says she didn't know Fritz was so easily flustered, to which he replies that he actually isn't.

2-7:
- The Bug Maniac originally had a bit more to say. As an extra, his name is Tulu Turner.

2-8:
- Originally, what was going on with the shrine was a bit more obvious. That is to say, still not obvious at all.

2-9:
- No real changes.

2-10:
- More detail into the Four Forces was dropped.
- Fritz was originally going to wonder why Elyna wasn't being considered, but I decided to have it slip his mind.

2-11:
- Premala vs. Elyna was to make an appearance here. However, I decided the former was showing up too much recently, and so just had Teiko deliver the news.

2-12:
- Nothing changed.

2-13:
- I cut a small scene with Nidorina here in the name of brevity. Wait, this chapter isn't out yet!!