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8thSin

Amagami - UTW

Jan 11th, 2012
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  1. *7:27 - Error, Logic(minor) / "you really helped me out when you supported me" -> "you were a big help when you supported me", redundant.
  2. *09:54 - Literal(minor) / "pride" -> "competitive"
  3. **10:43 - Error / "Start solving the fundamental practices{easiest ones} first!"
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