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- Hello! I'm Cada, and I'll be reviewing you!
- The review will be split into three sections: Terrain, Organics, and Structure.
- First off, your terrain is incredibly flat. It would be nice to see some variation, especially on the sides of your building. Maybe some small-ish hills? You could also add tunnels/caves if you're feeling up for it.
- Now for Organics. Your trees look like they were bone-mealed. I would suggest re-doing your trees and adding more variety to them, such as the shape of the trunk and leaves. Make 'em look original instead of looking like they would be in a survival world. If you need help, please feel free to ask a mod.
- And now for structure. The lapis floor is a bid clashy. With the palette your going for, I would suggest to try mixing in quarts blocks. Your columns are a tad bit thin, I would suggest adding more to them possibly, making it look like they can actually hold a roof. The slime blocks don't really go with your build, and right now it doesn't look like they have a purpose. Also, I feel like the orange wool doesn't really go with your build either. You can make it work by putting quarts stairs/slabs in front of the wool to make it slightly hidden, but having it just out there looks weird. Also, your roofs are incredibly flat. I would suggest adding more to the top of your roof, to make it less flat.
- If you have any questions, feel free to ask a mod!
- ~Cada
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