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- Hello everyone! Come in, come in. Settle in, make yourselves comfy. Today we're going to discuss *punctuation!*
- Now, I'm not perfect. My proofreading skills are the worst and more than once I accidentally a word, but damn it, I try. We have a lot of really impressive writers on DPP too! It's one of the reasons why I really love the community. But there's something I'm seeing, again and again, especially as I RP with people. A scourge, you might say, a blight on what's frequently an otherwise good response or prompt.
- Poorly punctuated dialogue.
- It's by far the most common error I see, so today I'm going to go over a few examples about correct punctuation for dialogue! And I'm going to do it... by writing dialogue!
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- "This is an example of correctly punctuated dialogue. The comma goes at the end of what I say, and everything is inside the quotation marks," she said.
- "Here is another example," he added. "The first sentence ends with a comma, because it had a dialogue tag at the end, or the words 'he added.' But this bit of dialogue does not need a comma, because there will be no tag, and instead uses a period."
- "This is an example," she said, "of how you should correctly punctuate a split in your character's sentence. Notice the comma after the word 'said' instead of a period!"
- "This kind of exchange is why it's important to *always start a new paragraph when a new character is speaking,*" he stressed.
- "Otherwise it isn't obvious a new person is speaking!" she agreed.
- "Oh, look at that wonderful example of how to punctuate with an exclamation mark," he said. "Using it *instead* of the comma is correct, but be sure to *not* capitalize the word that would normally follow the end quotation."
- "Is the same true of question marks?" she asked.
- "Why yes," he said, "it is true, like you just showed us."
- "I think we've covered all the basics of punctuating dialogue," she said with a smile.
- "Indeed!" He grinned. "It gets more advanced from here, like how I didn't use a dialogue tag at all in this dialogue, and so I need to capitalize the he, unlike before."
- "This sure is confusing sometimes!"
- "Isn't it?" he asked. "You didn't even use a tag there at all, but I could still tell it was the female character speaking because of the way a new paragraph was started."
- "Well, can we ask questions in the comments below?"
- "You sure can! Take it away, you sexy octothorpe!"
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- Thank you nameless generic punctuation characters!
- Just like they said, if you have any questions, just ask them here! I will be happy to help you better understand how to make your dialogue cleaner and easier to read.
- Thanks for reading and happy writing!
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