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OPENING EPISODES CONCEPT 0.0.1

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  1. This is a suggested outline for the first few episodes, written by Darc.
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  3. We start our series off with "Lord Renais D'Arc's" announcement of conquest towards the city and eventually the world. It's abnormally polite, save for the bits about providing those that interfere with suffering the likes of which they cannot imagine. Nothing happens, so the residents of [UNNAMED] City pay it little mind. It's joked about online, but not much else. This is where we introduce Joey, the main protagonist. By all standards, he's an average kid. He's the casual observer as far as the story is concerned at this point.
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  5. We use the first episode to introduce Joey, Darc, and the first hero, whomever that may be.
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  7. After school joey watches the news to learn recent events. From here, he learns that today, the crazy faceless man from that announcement of conquest held up one of the many banks in the city with a few low-class mooks in tow. After incinerating a policeman who fires on him, Darc reminds everyone around him what he said about interfering. "Don't involve yourself, and I'll make sure no harm comes to you." he says. He blasts open the safe, and begins looting money alongside his mooks. Not long after they begin, the first hero arrives on the scene! Darc, not deeming the hero an immediate threat to himself, given that he finds their armor to look ridiculous, and sends his mooks to deal with the hero.
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  9. Unsurprisingly, the mooks get their shit wrecked in a fight scene, and Darc starts to take them seriously. Attempting to blast them with fire doesn't work due to their robotic armor, and at a disadvantageous position where firing explosives might risk harming an innocent, Darc exchanges "names" with the hero before leaving via teleport. Our hero runs off, presumably in search of the vanishing villain. The media settles on shortening "Lord Renais D'Arc" to "Darc". The entire media report is done with a few sound-recording cameras in the bank, but as such, it comes out in awkward angles.
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  11. The next few episodes follow Joey on his everyday life, all the while giving him info on the plot at hand via the news. These filler sort of episodes include two additions to the hero squad.
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  13. On one particular day off from school, Joey is actually on the scene of the latest class between the two groups, with Darc somehow slowly beating the hero squad. One of the newer members of the team, whom currently lacks armor and has stayed out of combat and the eyes of the media, has the technical knowhow and the tools to make said armor, requests that Joey give his scooter up to allow for the creation of a new armor suit. The extra suit might be enough to help the team get back on their feet and defeat Darc once again. Seeing Darc about to unleash a finishing move, Joey takes the incomplete armor and rushes onto the scene, distracting him long enough for the team to rally and prepare their own powerful attacks. Seeing he's clearly lost today, Darc teleports away while announcing his hatred for this mysterious new entry to the team.
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  15. Because the armor is now locked to Joey's biometric code, only he can operate it, indirectly forcing him to join the hero squad, not that he's unhappy to be joining the intrepid heroes he constantly cheered for whilst watching the news.
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  17. The member who lacks a suit of armor gets their own a few episodes after Joey joins the team.
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  19. End Outline Concept.
  20. Be sure to PM me any corrections and/or criticism, because those are things needed to provide a satisfactory storytelling experience.
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