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- edited and much better prose: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/268291/a-sunrise-to-remember
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- >"See you tomorrow Sunset!"
- "I'll see you around girls!"
- >Your six friends leave the grounds of Equestrian High School as you lean against the flagpole.
- >After Princess Twilight came and took her crown back, everything has been different.
- >In it's own good little way.
- >You have friends now.
- >Classmates like you and the whole school seems to be a little happier of a place.
- >Instead of fearing you, people like you.
- >It feels good not to be sitting at the lunch table alone.
- >Being invited into parties was one of the greatest feelings you've experienced.
- >However one thing still hasn't changed...
- >You sigh to yourself and look into the sky.
- >While the grass was green and the sun was high in the sky today, the world seemed dark and grey to you.
- >You didn't belong in this world and you never have.
- >Shoving your hands in your pocket, you begin your walk towards the back of the school, head down.
- >No parents.
- >No family.
- >Plenty of friends... and only 5 that understood that you weren't from here.
- >Yet, nowhere to live or to get a warm meal.
- >Tomorrow was the next day for the portal to open.
- >Everything was so much different in this world.
- >In the pony world, at your age, you can buy a home, get a job, and make a living.
- >Reaching the maintenance door of the school, you look at the door with dread.
- >You've been able to learn not to cry anymore.
- >The janitor wasn't really a bad guy, just lonely.
- >All you had to do was say you loved him after he was done.
- >Then you could sleep on the floor.
- >You draw a shallow breath and shakily let it out.
- >Tomorrow you are going back.
- >Then everything will be better.
- >It can't possibly be worse than here.
- >The full moon stands high in the sky amidst the frigid air.
- >You stare at the portal within the statue of the high school mascot.
- >All of your prized possessions are packed to take with you.
- >An empty backpack.
- >A backpack gifted to you by Principal Celestia.
- >A guilty feeling in your stomach boils to the surface.
- >What is Celestia going to think when you come back?
- >You shake your head.
- >At this point, you can't afford to think like that.
- >You let out a deep breath and step into the statue.
- ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
- >The world rushes past you in a blinding speed
- >Your body is pulled apart at the edges.
- >Fingers are pushed into your hands and your back is on fire.
- >Hands constrict your neck as it becomes harder to breathe.
- >You try to scream, but nothing comes out.
- ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
- >The air is less frigid as you slowly open your eyes.
- >You are much warmer here as you feel marble on your face.
- >Trying to rub your eyes, you stab them with a hoof.
- >Oh yeah.
- >That will take some time to get used to again.
- >Groaning, you slowly set your front two hooves on the floor and try to get on all four hooves.
- >You stretch and crack you neck.
- >Walking down the hallways of Canterlot Castle, your muscles slowly regain their memory of being a pony.
- >Once you walked these halls with pride and a sense of self-satisfaction.
- >Today you walk them full of worry and curiosity.
- >"HALT! STAY WHERE YOU ARE!"
- >Stopping in your tracks, you turn to the guard with a light smile.
- >The guard shines his light on you and his expression turns to shock.
- >"You... the Princess will want to speak to you at once."
- >"Well, I'll be honest Sunset, I didn't expect you to come back."
- >Celestia takes a sip of her tea as you stare at the cup in front of you.
- "It's like they say Princess, the grass isn't always greener right?"
- >She nods.
- >"Maybe you are still willing to learn."
- >You look up to her with glimmer of hope in your eye.
- "You mean..."
- >"Don't take that the wrong way. I am not willing to make you my student."
- >You stare into your tea for some form of consolation.
- "I understand."
- >"However, perhaps Twilight will be able to help you rebuild your life here in Equestria."
- >Twilight Sparkle.
- >Despite being one of your only friends here in Equestria, you refuse to accept help from anyone.
- >You will rebuild your life on your own.
- "I would enjoy visiting Twilight... but I would prefer to build my life myself Princess."
- >"Then how do you plan to get to her?"
- >You shift in your seat.
- "I-I don't know, but I'm working on it."
- >With a golden aura, a train ticket to Ponyville is placed in your hooves.
- >You look across the table at Celestia with curiosity.
- "Why?"
- >"Because I believe you deserve a second chance. I think Twilight and her friends can do a lot of good for you. I have faith in them."
- >You smile and begin to tear up.
- "T-thank you Princess. I won't let you down."
- >You have a train to catch.
- >Standing up, you get ready to leave.
- >"Sunset."
- >You turn to Celestia.
- "Yes Princess?"
- >"I encourage you to get your life on the road first, before you try to find love. I am well aware of how... obsessive you can get."
- >Nervously, you chuckle.
- "Y-yeah. I'll do better."
- >Exiting the Princess's presence, you take another deep breath.
- "~Obsessive~. What a bitch."
- "I'll take it."
- >"Alright, I'll get the papers ready. Welcome to your new home in Ponyville Sunset Shimmer."
- "Sounds great. Thank you."
- >The agent leaves your quiet home and you look around at your new beginning.
- >It will take a few weeks of doing some odd jobs until you can get a normal income.
- >All you need is a bit of time.
- "Well. Better earn a bed to sleep in."
- >Heading out of your home, you step directly into Ponyville market.
- >The hustle and bustle of the crowds help you blend in.
- >Just be normal, for a while.
- >However, in the midst of the chaos, one beautiful creature catches your eye.
- >Butterflies fill your chest.
- >Your eyes lock onto him.
- >The tall hunk of a man opens his mouth.
- "Are you fucking kidding me? Three bits for a pear? I'd rather take a shit in my own mouth you fucking jewpony."
- >"Sir, they were four bits last week..."
- "No wonder the Apples are running you guys out of business, they only charge two bits per apple."
- >"Sir, pears are harder to-"
- "Oh suuuurrre. Harder to make. Tell it to my asshole."
- >You walk away from the stand with a tall stride.
- >Wait for it...
- >Wait for it...
- >"Two bits per pear sir."
- "Perfect. Give me a dozen."
- >As you sweep up the pears with a wide smile, the pony looks down at the ground with tears in his eyes.
- "Hey."
- >He looks up at you.
- "You aren't really THAT much of a jew. That was harsh. My bad."
- >He sighs and nods.
- >That wraps up your shopping for today.
- >Time to head home.
- >Turing around, you bump into a tan pony with ketchup and mustard hair.
- >Kinda like a hamburger.
- "Oh, my bad."
- >"S-sorry."
- >You stand up and look at the pony.
- "Hey. I don't recognize you... are you new here?"
- >"Yeah. My name is Sunset. Sunset Shimmer."
- "Nice to meet you. The name's Anonymous."
- >You hold your hand out for a hoofshake and she happily shakes it.
- "Well, uh. Here."
- >You take a pear from your bag and hand it to her.
- >She eyes it carefully.
- "Consider it a welcome gift. Hope you enjoy Ponyville. We should hang out sometime."
- >"Y-yeah..."
- >She stares at you.
- >It's kinda discomforting.
- "Well.. uh. Bye."
- >"Bye~" she replies.
- >You begin your trek back home and look over your shoulder at her.
- >She's still staring.
- >Weird ass pony.
- >Holy shit things are getting weird.
- >Every where you go, there is Sunset.
- >Go to work at the farm, there is Sunset.
- >Head to the library to see Twilight, there is Sunset.
- >Fluttershy has a fetish guess, there is Sunset.
- >She started following you around town all the time.
- >Whenever you found her, she would act like it was all one big coincidence.
- >You sit on a hill to watch a beautiful sunset.
- >"Oh, hi Anon. Funny seeing you here."
- "Oh. Hey."
- >There is Sunset.
- "To what do I owe the pleasure this time?"
- >"Well, uh. I got done working today... and just wanted to relax."
- "Sure."
- >"No really... I didn't expect to see you here. I come here every day."
- >Huh. Sunset watches the sunset.
- >Fantastic writing there Flutterpriest.
- >Screw you too Anon.
- >"So, uh. How long have you been here Anon?"
- "Well, to be honest, I lost count. Soon I started to just assign names and topics to the days once I forgot what number I was on."
- >"I see. Well, what's your story?"
- "Well. I just sorta appeared here one day. Couldn't explain it. Lost everything I had on Earth, but I kept my form."
- >"I see that... It's just like where I was before I left Equestria."
- >You turn to Sunset.
- "You mean... somewhere with other humans?"
- >"Yeah. There were humans everywhere. I was a human too... but it's a dark place there. I would never go back."
- "Why?"
- >Suddenly it feels a little cold outside.
- >You feel the way that lonely man violated you.
- >Looking at the grass, you try to hold your composure.
- "I... don't wanna talk about it right now."
- >You feel a warmth envelop your back as you lay on the cold grass.
- >Anon sits closer to you after he places his jacket on your back.
- >"You don't have to say anything."
- >Anon wraps an arm around you and you look into his eyes.
- >Suddenly, your lips want to feel his.
- >He brings his face closer to yours.
- >Slowly.
- >Carefully.
- >You close your eyes, breath short and uneasy.
- ~~BEEP~~BEEP~~BEEP~~
- >Slowly you open your eyes as the hard wood floor of your new home.
- "Damn it."
- >You rub your eyes with a hoof.
- >If only that was really happened last night.
- >All the two of you did was talk about what it was like in that horrible place.
- >It made a bunch of terrible memories flood back.
- >But then again, when you were with him, everything seemed right again.
- >You have to be with him.
- >Today is the day.
- >You set off at a gallop towards Anon's house after fixing your hair.
- >No time to waste.
- >Bumping a familiar yellow pegasus out of the way, you push on for the homestretch.
- >Was it bad that you followed him home to get his address?
- >Probably.
- >Was it bad that you sneaked in to smell his laundry?
- >Well, nobody got hurt.
- >It was probably bad though that you had a secret way into his home.
- >Maybe.
- >You can tell him after you two are married.
- >Knocking on the door hard, you hear stirring from inside.
- >"God damn it Fluttershy for the last time..."
- >The door flies open, and Anon stands in the door way in just underwear.
- >Your marehood instantly becomes moist.
- >"Oh... it's you Sunset. What's up."
- "I want you to be my coltfriend."
- >Anon looks down at you with shock.
- >"Well. Uh. Sorry Sunset... I dunno how to break it to you... I mean, I loved our talk last night.. but I'm just not interested in ponies."
- >Suddenly the warm fall day feels much colder to you, although any other pony would tell you it was beautiful out.
- >"I'm sorry. I just can't."
- >He slowly closes the door and leaves you standing on his porch.
- >Turning around, you decide to head back home.
- >Not interested in ponies?
- >We'll see about that.
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